You have such a great story going. I'm enjoying the build ups and character development. Keep up the good work, but I do encourage you to go back and make some edits for the weird Grammar and "Where's your capitalization?" freaks.
I’m the author of the story and this story a sci-fi set in space. War is obviously set on the forefront but I think the many characters we meet along the way are the most important. If I could this really would’ve been a drama series, but then I’d think I would miss my core audience. Do please enjoy if you think this is your cup of thee.
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