All the world building and mysterious of the story loose its lustre because of MC.Mc is too blunt. He lacks uniqueness that makes a main character.It gets irritating when he cant even use his brain for anything.He is always like '"what do i do senior?". "should i speak senior ?" everything that he do, thinks all came from senior(sprit in the ring)I get it author said, story is slow-paced but this is too much . After reading 150 chapters i can say MC develop from naive idiot to brianless puppet
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This is a relacing read but its a shame that it did not get picked. The ML is interestingly unassuming and the story is different from what I usually read. That is a good thing, as sometimes its nice to broaden's one horizons. I cannot talk about other characters as its early yet. But I like this story.
okay so I'm not always write a review but this book somehow makes me wanna write one, but not for a good reason. there's several reason that makes me write this1. the inconsistency for the sake of the plot: I read how this was the author first take on game element story but can author make it more consistent, for example the effects of multiplying of the CCed time that somehow not trigger and the author said it's gonna be explained in later chapter, I mean you can said that's a requirement to trigger it when you first give that passive don't need add a mystery like this is a game story that bound to have explanation of the skill unless like requirements of the exp since it's related to job then I'm okay with it but skill one? yeah, I mean there's some game that have hidden mechanic for the skill but not with passive skill since it's passive. 2. next one how a game that only around for 4 years can affect real life? yeah sure you can exchange currency but it's normal but making doctor exam with game knowledge? that's kinda absurd. Unless the game affect reality and its integrated then fine. but how can game knowledge save someone life? only this two reason is enough to make it annoying yeah the writing quality is good but the world building and the consistency? (idc about there's irl stuff and such because I enjoyed but the moment you incorporate it and ruined it that's the problem you must solve)
The story plot so far is actually quite interesting but the gammar and the writing skills of the author is not very good as most of the sentences are run off lines and do not match with the next making it quite hard to read if the author improves on his writing the novel will be way better.
Acolytes other than martial fighters need a magical defensive circle to be able to turn Magus, because before reaching that rank they can only learn Offensive spells, on the other hand, the martial fighters can, however, they need a martial technique and have the understanding of the martial way.
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