King's Kane

Читал я эту новеллу и скажу одно очень понравилось наблюдать за гг и его проблемами. Очень хорошая работа была проделана автором но есть недостатки.

Hi I'm one of the translators for this novel and it was so fun to translate (and hopefully fun to read, for you)! The characters are fun and the story is just gearing up, so please review and support so that we can continue working on it!!

Pretty good start I'd say. Keep on writing author. I think the character development in your story is really good particularly. Good job!!!!!!

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