Kingdom of Heaven's

-What is it about-

Some fire guards nearby dragged me away. The ceremony was outside of the city of Virgo so if you had bending powers you were more likely to be taken to a smaller city to be taken as a prisoner. I was shoved into a small part of a city with a bunch of other people I didn't know. I am sorry Mama. I will see you again in this life...or another. People all around the area were giving me weird looks. Why would a small 10-year-old girl be put into an area like this? Some looked to the sky and then back to me giving me understanding looks. "Hey, my name is Alessandro. I am probably around your age. I'm 12. My father and mother are here would you want to stay with us seeing as you are new around here and your parents aren't probably coming?" a cheerful looking boy comes up to me.

dad 😢! dad who the hell did this to u

Isn't kizaru suppose to be here?

But she never knew life will never be normal for her after this day, life is always about twists and turns. .

"We should kill him and burn his body before he destroys our city!" Anju carefully looked at the boy. He looked terrible, yes, but he didn't show any signs of disease that Anju would know. He also didn't sense anything strange. He was a normal human boy.

"Oh my God." Maria Hill gasped, watching as the city was destroyed below them.

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story development, world background, writing style are all decent

Good story about revenge. Keep up the good work!