kinda serious reviewIt's pretty good overall, the way the MC doesn't give a sh*t gives a feeling of how much he has seen. There is also some flashbacks every once in awhile which is good to.
Great book thus far, author takes care to go back and edit if needed instead of just authors notes later. Great choice in music references and easy to get into and flow is smooth. Overall a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the book.
An interesting piece! Intriguing and powerful, it moves the reader at the pace it wanted... keeping the readers in their toes as they await the story to unfold.
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I'm kind of disappointed; I mean I'm not saying that the idea is bad but it feels the story is unrealistic for the most part and the interaction between characters is just straight out weird with lots of unfamiliar terms at that point time furthermore it feels rushed and those interviews at the start was awkward-I think you should pay more attention to details and making it more realistic and engaging and that is clearly lacking.It'd be better to showcase problems of caste system and how to solve these first then go ahead with military part while also taking care of nobles which are more of a tumor.I've read another Indian novel-(India that could be by Maddymudda)So I had great expectations!Nice try to be honest much appreciated as I too hail from the south so it's quite fascinating to read this novel which has great potential, I would really like it if you could attempt a rewrite or something to attract more audience.
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