Killing Cockroaches In Xianxia For Self-Preservation

Hi, Just want to once again  add that this is my first story so it is inevitable that i will make mistakes, I apologise for that but i'm doing this for fun, so don't expect a lot.
Feedback is always welcome as i do want to look for ways to improve, and I don't a specific stuff set out so if you have any suggestions then you can also leave them and if i find it good i'll implement it. Hopefully you enjoy this and if not then fair enough. Thanks
Gave it 3 stars as i don't want to rate my own story.

Really like the story. Still only around 20 chapters, but it's still so good. Like the mc and his strength development. So its a new and very interesting story on this site.

This story is very fun. Seeing our mc fight the mc of the first world is very fun and the interactions with the system are fun. One thing that does annoy me is the proactiveness of the MC, he often just lets things happen without actively being involved in the plot. I understand why he does this and it also makes sense because it is his first world but I hope that changes as the story goes on and he goes around yoinking a lot more important stuff. That being said, the MC isn't a weak character though some of his actions can be seen as a little cowardly.

The story right now is pretty simple and its enjoyable. I don't have any major problems with it, it's not great, its not bad. This story does not deserve a 5 but due to the nature of this platform I gotta give it a 5 otherwise I may as well have killed its parents.

This is my frst review and my english is not god-tier, so I apologize if there is anything that can't be understood.

First of all, I have to say that even though this book doesn't have too much chapters (at least in the moment I am doing this review) I think that have a great history with an MC that is not really OP but has a great Character Design with a strong sense humour sense that makes him singular and memorable. I personally love how he reacts in his mind when he sees Xianxia tropes like an arrogant young master, a jade beauty or a crazy murder MC.

About the history I can't say too much for now (the premise is engaging and the author is doing great things with that). About the World Background, I think that this history  presents a logical world  and (at least from what I readed) a reality that show us how a Xianxia world is for the people who is not a protagonist in his/her history Xianxia.

I personally recommend this book.

4th wall breaks at the start are two good. Making fun of cliches, and the comedy is gold. extraextraextraextraextraextraextraextraextraextraextra

the story is too slow till now chapters 86?the progress to kill protagonist is just barely there and this is like multi jump world type thing and he still barely making progress in his 1st world, and I didn't even like the protagonist,

never seen a mc more cowardly and useless, even dense jp mc have more backbone

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Great book! Really enjoying the story and the characters.
Keep uploading

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