Kai & Raven

Hey guys! Yeah the author's review...If you are looking for a story with game elements and a lot of action, do try this book.As the author, I will be giving it a five star review, but I'll also try to keep up with the review.Writing quality: I aim to keep spelling and grammatical errors to minimum and you can also expect the Writing quality to improve with every chapter.I plan to keep the school arc short while all the characters will grow as the story progresses.The world background will also be clear and detailed.So, please do leave a review and vote if you like the story.

in three words best novel everfor who doesn't believe me just keep raiding and you will seein three words best novel everfor who doesn't believe me just keep raiding and you will see

The story is promising for a sci fiction and there are light humor too. Author english is better than most of the stories around here. Readers should give this awesome story a chance as it has colorful characters and you will feel immerse into it.

I love this book. Author your foreshadowing ability is off the charts.

the Author has soooo much hatred for Japan til he had to drug in Japan in this novel, he is probably gonna make the MC slaughter all Japanese

Some of the few things I have to say of this novel:the idea of the system is pretty darn original, I mean so far I don't think that I've read about this kinda system somewhere else. And coming from a person who reads a lot of novels, it says a lot. Overall, it's a great original idea.Writing quality is great and the flow is smooth. I'm a few chapters in and I'm liking what I read. Out protagonist Diamond is a kind-hearted lady who has been heart by love in the past, not to mention that she was born in a poor (somewhat) family. After an act of kindness, she gains a system. Honestly, after getting rewards, I half expected her to be frugal, due to background, or absolutely batsh't rich. spree. Ngl, she's somewhere in the middle. I love what I read, I'll continue reading it, that's for sure. Keep up the great work, Author!

Lets faking goooo,. It's a good translation. Keep this quality of work and keep the chapters rolling,🤟

Meanwhile back at Fire Desert, a large group of A rank adventurers were marching into the area where Hestia used to be located at. There were over twenty A rank adventurers who had gathered together quickly as a monster who was capable of wiping out an A rank party was too dangerous to ignore.

Of all the questions she expected, it was the only one she had not anticipated. We can even say that the boy in front of her had managed to surprise her.

HISS~

A figure emerged from a dark place hovering above Kuro Shin while holding a huge blade covered with massive killing intent.

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