Hello! I've started your novel for a while and I pretty much like it! I'm a huge fan of zombie stories and I can't find a fix since TWD in the comicbook version ended for a while before. Most of the things here have OP powers and would move away from what I prefer.This thing is the closest thing I could find that is next to the one I like! Thanks for this! I'll give another review when I catch up!
There really isn't much to say about this novel, if you've been reading TLed Eastern Fantasy novel's for a respectable amount of time you've probably read quite a few novels like this. This doesn't try to do anything unique with the tropes, no gimmick, just a safe, generic predictable, plot I could guess in my sleep. Perhaps this could be slightly interesting to someone completely new to the whole disciple multiplication trope but otherwise this really isn't worth your time, I could describe this novel in one word: Pedestrian. Despite this, I'll be generous and give this novel a passing grade (referring to the hollow "5 stars" above, not my actual score at the end of the review) since recently, the standards on Webnovel have somehow managed to fall further and again this could be alright to a newbie or just someone who isn't tired of stuff like this.This'd get a higher score if I wasn't tired of it but this is as generous as I can get. 1.5/5.
what's wrong with novels these days or is it just chinese authors that write dumb novels.MC just doesn't makes sense. Possessiveness over a girl doesn't make sense.Sports car idea doesn't make sense, he never thought about the fact that people will see.Shouting in the classroom just because he can understand math.The fact is that MC is unrelatable. Even the worst students know something but he seems like a totally illiterate person.Even the trend is now moving towards intelligent and somewhat relatable MC's.
I'm literally obsess with this book. I mean, it's the only book that I've read like every day since joining web novel. And I'm in love with the character Arthur.
This book is awesomeI have been following it for a long time, and it keeps getting better and betterIt feels like a eal book, not a web novel and it has very good character developmentNanakawaichan is my favourite author and all her books are aweaome
Loving the story so far, its a little fast paced when there's nothing important and keeps the romance at a slower rhythm but still enjoyable. The story keeps its self fresh (at least in the first 31 chapters) and lets the reader enjoy the story and its pace. Greatly recommend it. For the people that think its yuri, it isn't...
This novel is an absolute KINO work. I'm not fond of writing about what isn't in a work, but rather, what is in a work; however, it should first be established that LoTM is devoid of most of the commonplace tropes you find in CN novels. Of course, if you examine it closely, you'll find that it does indeed adhere to some frustrating qualities. Namely, the constant "SASUGA FOOL" and the mental gymnastics Alger especially will go through in order to achieve the requirements for a certain plot point to occur. Nevertheless, these problems are, for the most part, unrealistic at worst, but still within the scope of being believable. All of the major characters in LoTM have well-established traits and personalities, along with motivations. Derrick has his naive-and-steadfast character, focused on freeing his home-city from its foggy jail; Alger has his mature and experienced, sometimes overthinking personality; and of course, Klein with his constant lampooning. Also Klein's stepping counterclockwise four times. And also his tapping his glabella twice. An especially noticeable trait about LoTM's major characters, in comparison to most CN novels, is that they all progress. Not just in terms of their "cultivation" (named Sequences in this novel), but also their personalities. A fault I do have to give, however, is that the development is extremely slow for many of these characters. Of course, that's a given, given the length of the novel. Still, it is somewhat irksome.In regards to the story development, LoTM excels in this regard. There is never a moment where you feel that one scene or event is out-of-place, and you receive a sense of gratification when Klein, or any of the characters, really, manage to piece one event with another using in-world knowledge that was previously already provided. For the most part, the story has either action sequences, or sequences with Klein/others planning/thinking/conjecturing/lampooning about matters. When you have the odd occasion where it's a sort of "filler" chapter, you don't really feel that it's out of place for the most part, as most of the "filler" chapters are there to relieve the reader out of the constant action - and when not doing that, to develop a character some more. And I use "filler" in quotations because, later on, almost all of these chapters will 100% not be filler, as they will have some meaning later on. This is a writing technique used by the author I've never seen before in any other webnovel, in which he uses even "fluff" chapters to insert meaningful information that will tie in together. It's amazing.As for the world building, this novel has one of the best I've seen in my entire life - whether that be in regards to web novels, light novels, or even well-acclaimed stories from the West. It's hard to summarize without an entire novel to write, but in essence, LoTM's lore really does make you feel as though you're reading about the story of a person who is actually real, in a real other world. All the sects/churches/gods and their supernatural backgrounds and lore tie in very neatly, and if you check out the wiki, you'll find that there is boundless amounts of information about the world that was very obviously all planned out by the author from the start.Another incredible detail about LoTM is the amount of settings in which it contains. The story takes place in many different locations, from your "atypical" victorian-era city which is actually full of secret supernatural gangs, churches, and pirates, all the way to the City of Silver, which is separated from the rest of the world and at the technological level of a medieval age. This is in most part due to the varying amount of main cast members in the story, as well as another major point about the MC which I won't talk about because spoilers. And just in case you're worried, none of these locations are forgotten about. In LoTM, there is no "other region" full of more advanced versions of previous characters like in CN novels. Characters of all varying power levels, straight from the middling novice Sequence 9 to a Sequence 4 (already beginning to enter Godhood) can be placed in the same city. This means that the main characters in LoTM will regularly go between new places and old places in its world.Lastly, I should talk about the thematic elements in this story. That's right, thematic elements! Unlike many other online web novels (I know I've said this many times), LoTM contains actual themes and ideas around its narrative. The first volume, "Clown
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