Not worthy of the rank of first on the site. There is nothing special at all going on here. MC finds an old machine and because of boredom gains OPness. I've read bad beginning to novels but this one takes the cake at the character's opening lines being boredom. If there were more chapters I might be able to rate this higher but there is nothing special to see here. Characters are plain and antagonists are your everyday classics. There were even filler chapters in the first 20, come on now, I expect better from a first ranked novel.
Interesting, comical and exciting read. Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!Need more chapters!
beautifully written novel. definitely recommend, it's enjoyable and has pretty fresh ideas. mc isn't brain dead, no stupid cliches, nice system, little to no loopholes, all in all it's a good book.
Just read the first ten chapters. I still have to catch up, but this story is entertaining. There are some typos, but it is normal for us, which is English is not our first language. All the characters are well established. The scenes are detailed, and one can make out the image in mind. I like the story progresses. I was just confused about some of the transitions of the scenes, but that can be overlooked. Keep it up, Mr. Author ;-)
[Ratings are based off trial read standard]So ive read up to the start of payed chapters and honestly, for a trail read, this novel isnt that bad. The worldbuilding isnt very fleshed out if you are new to the genre but if you are enough is explained to not be totally confused.The system is also done pretty well with a lot of hard work and commitment needed for development , although it seems the alchemy cheat is a bit much with the context we have been given about the difficulty of pill refining in this world.The first few chapters obviously have the villian who bullies the mc, but the reason is clearly explained and is justifiable with the setting and is, i believe, temporarily relieved early on to start the actual story.Future Female MC has been introduced yet the description so far is vague but her character is slowly being drawn out and is quite respected and an actual character instead of 'ivory skin and peachy lips with cloths that barely cover her'.Also the daugher is really cute so far and isnt annoying which they sometimes can be unintentionally. Especially if she is taught the skills of her Mother and the MC, she could become a really good character in future chapters/arcs.Thank you for reading, im not ue to doing reviews but wanting to write more for trial reads up to the paywall.
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