while there's the occasional wring word used in places, I assume that is due to translation .I LOVED this story. I adored little Zaos and his never yield attitude. it was great. Some Character's story can be heartbreaking, others are amazing in their depth and uniqueness. check out the story. I'm sure others will enjoy it as much as I am.
Let me describe this book in 1 word. Perfection. I am hooked to this book. Although this is usually not the genre I read this book as managed to captivate me in a way many others have. looking forward to future updated!!! <3
The reason I'm giving this a such low review is that everything is so simple and underdeveloped. The MC is op which is fine but the way you write him. He seems kinda single-sided. The storyline with Rumi needs to be developed more because even though they are soulmates they still need a more detailed love story. The writing quality is really simple, but it's your first fanfic so I can't blame you. I know that's it is hard to write them but just try to make the story feel real. The character design needs work to because Rumi seems like a simpleminded character.
Story about a game where u can chose between city Lord or normal player.MC choose to become city Lord he has to defend his city from monsters that comes in a wave. He can build towers and post quest for other players to work as "towers" to defend his city. It's very tower defense like game as a city Lord. It's decent paced with good world background thus far, bit of mystery in reality. Hope it gets picked
Firstly I just binged read up to chapter 55 and I must say thank you as I am enjoying this story. The lack of seriously over used cliches and nipple twisting plot turns. Also just the overall plot direction being generally unguessable is worth the read. I have read a lot of stories and this one I must say have the potential to be in my top ten that I would recommend and reread when I want to enjoy the story all over again.
The storyline is quite unique and it immediately piqued my mind. Though generally I don't prefer this genre but this novel changed my views completely. The story development is also quite good and at pace.Keep your hard work on! Good luck!
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