Journey to the underworld: How I became the demon king

Very bad it’s hard to stay focused on reading this due to the lack of writing skills the author has

I think the author is just trying to tell us, he has daddy issues through this novel😂😂😂😂. .................................................................................................,..

The world background is frustrating and confusing. Readers will spend a lot of time wondering where the setting is (it’s not explained until pretty far into the story).The most frustrating thing about the story is the knock-offs of existing work. He releases The Halfling (The Hobbit) with Filbo Fabbins (Bilbo Baggins) as the main character. Every non-original song has the song title and lyrics altered in a way that’s  disorienting and confusing. I guarantee you most of the readers googled the lyrics to see which song it is. It takes you out of the immersive experience. If you’re going to rip something off, you might as well be honest about it. I don’t know if the author is trying to avoid copyright strikes or whatever, but you can safely reference existing works as long as you properly cite it. Even using lyrics would be fine, it’s considered fair use.The language is stilted. You can tell the author speaks English as a second language. This is far from the worst story on Webnovel though. But…It often comes off as word salad. Especially the chapter titles (it looks like Mad Libs sometimes).The names of the MC and the supporting characters are awful - they’re not memorable in a literary sense. The other thing that bothers me is that this is a novel that requires payment. Given all of the problems with the story, I don’t think this rises to the level of a work requiring payment. I’m not trying to discourage the author. In fact, if he fixes what I suggested, I’d revise the rating to 4.5/5 stars. It’s an interesting premise and can be engaging.

I don't know about story development or the translating quality or the stability of this novel yet.But, I really like this kind story when MC not that kind of 'saintly' but the 'evil'...And I just kinda think if the MC wanna be villain but act as if he was a hero (save people along his way/save every beauty in his way/tell every person and acting silly about his destiny to be villain), I WILL really REALLY DROP IT..Well, I hope not...So I think I will waiting for update ^_^

Not a bad overall read. It’s slightly similar to AFK, just with a slightly less standoffish protagonist, modern setting, and not as OP system. As for the neighbor, she was only in the story for one chapter really — the only lengthy interaction they had was when Qi Shu saved her from a wolf that had found its way into their neighborhood. I don’t know what other people were reading, but it was a perfectly normal scene. Do give it a try.

Well... What can I say?! The Comments of people feel like They are written by low-IQ people. It's like this - "Oh! she survived cause' she was lucky" "Her dad is trash" yet there is no appearance of MC

I do enjoy almost everything about this story.the characters are unique it's a stable story ect. but I did have to stop reading it because frankly the author is a pro at stretching a paragraph or two of information into 2 entire chapters. unfortunately it seemed to take away from the moment when It took 2 chapters for a spar to start and like 2 more chapters for them to do a couple moves it kind of reminded me of DBZ having an entire episode of screaming lol. However if you enjoy that much description then you'll definitely enjoy this book

Time flew fast but the friendship between the three of them didn't change. When they were finally in their third year, it was rare to see the three of them together like before. Lee Minho had been so busy with his acting lesson that he had not had much time to spend with Choi Sujin and Hwang Jaejin. So, mostly it was only Choi Sujin and Hwang Jaejin who sat together -sometimes there were several people who came and joined them, of course they were mostly boys or girls who was in good relationship with Choi Sujin such as Jang Min Ah and ... Jang Min Ah.