Journey To Become A True God

The novel is good but the grammar is fucking ****!
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The authors English is very poor and it’s really hard to read chapters. The auntie updates regularly but never responds to comments so far everything is very cliche and the world building is almost non existent it feels like the author is trying to cram a bunch of cliches together and hope fans like it.

Absolutely terrible grammar. Regardless of how good your ideas may be I cannot read this trash. I recommend you hire an editor for your work. Machine translated novels are easier to read than your work. This is the novel's standard. So fellow readers who can read this novel you have my praise. I tried reading all of the first few chapters but I could not handle the bad grammar. If you cannot read it everything get's one star.

As you have read the reviews you would know that the grammar is terrible but it is not enough for the low rating. there are many issues with the novel. The strat was nice but things downgrade quickly. He gets his 1st girlfriend within a day who also accepts all the things he says such as cultivation. She also quickly comes to the fact that he needs a lot more women. She doesn’t seem to be reluctant about it and even actively finds more girls for him. This happens very quickly that itis unreal. All the following characters are similar.

They are like ‘I can’t accept sharing.’ Then ‘reluctantly’ accept due to his body which requires more women then bam...they also actively search for new ‘sisters’. All beautiful women he comes across are gonna emd up with him. We cannot even distinguish between them. There is no character development and the world building is horrble. There is no story or struggle. The novel is basically a collection of cliches.

Overall its a decent story with nice background and characters sadly i find the story development lacking but its not all that bad, however the worst part about this novel is writing or rather the grammar part... I don't think i need speak more about how horrible the grammar is.

I started reading this novel despite the terrible grammar, but I could not read more than two chapters, because MC is incredibly stupid, seriously, even children have more logic and reason than this idiot, I do not recommend starting reading this novel for those who have at least minimal standards of "adequacy" of the protagonist.

So obviously a of negative comments, but the story isn't bad overall. It has good progression but author could explain some things a little better. Biggest downfall, is in the later chapters author just reuses/rewords the same action the MC/other characters do. Still ongoing and from what I've seen on other sites, it's pretty much the same thing. So not sure if author is having a hard time creating material or if it's just so that they can reach minimum words for each chapter. Honestly that's the biggest headache, reading the same thing 3-4 times throughout the chapter and in the end they've only done like 3 actual things throughout it. If it's a creativity issue then my recommendation is to just slow down on number of chapters per week. If it's cause they wanna be lazy and just use the excess as a filler to complete the chapter, then the readers that have made it to the later chapters will likely stop reading as well. Anyway, hope that bit gets changed but other than that I like the story so far

Classic trashy xianxia modern day only with terrible english to the point that you can't read it.                                          

Worst part is the Webnovel admins allowed it to go premium/paid and have privilege. F*ck me