I'm interested in seeing how the story progresses. If you like stories about reincarnation of the main into a younger self with the chance to do things right you should definitely check this story out :)
Is this novel going to be like the strongest system?I am guessing this will be a good read based on other system based novels I have read. How many chapters does the raws have right now? I will make another review once I have actually read the novel
3/3/3/3/3 = 3quality= normal little to no grammar issueshard to follow, no backstory nor explanation<remindes me of every Assassins Creed game where you jump right into "action" / "combat" without knowing what to do>Updates = 3: stable, no mass releases nor chapters hiatus for more than 2+ days Story / Char / World : 3 mediocre descriptions of the actions etc, would help more if there was a backstory or glossary to help I'm borderline dropping it. not my cup of tea tbh, an Assassin Creed Style writing ..... just waiting for the intro < Assassins Creed ..... Elementalists> then the flyover of the eagle and then exiting the Animus
Don't just don't do this to yourself. It is bad. Starts out ok but the author demands money not even 50 chapters in. Forgets what he writes, horrible power scaling (quite ironic) overall disappointing.
It's only got five chapters (or four if the first chapter was a prologue) but it feels distinctive from others stories I've read. I mean, "we can't have our own zombie apocalypse so make it on VR world so the virus won't spread into our real world."Anyway, everything is in a good state, especially the scenes with guns and booms... if you can describe it more "gore-ly" and add more blood, it will be much better. The characters seems unique, and the AI as well.Overall, good job.
I like the novel. There's a bit of critique, but that's their preference. There are also a lot of 5-star ratings. If there were grammar issues, that's not a big problem. Editing it oneself is such a pain so just nicely comment about wrong grammars if you see it. Even if I see it, I just ignore lol. <SPOILER>One of the things I want to salp out of the novel is having the Mc sleeping with his teacher. Well, idk what happened cuz I haven't read the new chapters. I just stopped cuz I wanted a platonic heroine. :P
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