REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉ADVICENone, the author was a better writer compared to me..... kudos!
Overall it’s a fine story. The main issues are that all the girls surrounding the main character cry whenever something happens. Its used way to much to be normal. It would also be nice if the author had an auxiliary chapter or something similar that explains the different cultivation stages and gives some world background. There are also a few grammer and spelling errors, but it isnt too bad.
I see music, I vote. Synopsis is pretty confusing but ehhh it's music!! That's definitely a great reason for you to vote for a novel. I have high hopes for you, young man. (or novel?? lol)
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
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