Of course, this sight brought not a single ounce of lust to the leader of the Household, who only stared at the man getting dragged all around the place by holding tightly onto one of her legs, the guy was topless and seemed to have put his pants up in a hurry before ashaming himself.
Its terrible, the grammer alone gave me a headache. There isn’t any real explanations either and it’s laden with so much plot armor, Its like the author can’t be helped to come up with a proper start to the story and wants to immediately jump into the middle. it might not be so bad if there where proper translators.
Im kinda scared to start reading cuz all of your other books are on hiatus and im worried that you are gonna put this one on hiatus and start another book so i was wondering if the same was gonna happen to this book later and you start another book or if you are gonna keep with itPlease reply author and quell my worries 🙏
I’ve spent years wandering aimlessly through the darkness, you see for most of my life I’ve been blind. At least that was the case until I began reading Fallen Stars. Page after page, reveal after reveal the light I once thought was lost returned as a roaring cascade of emotions. For the 1st time I could see what I’d long to see for so long, GREATNESS.
I haven't read this yet, but I really felt your synopsis and the fact that it's a web novel system was a great start. So, I gave you 5 Stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and added to read for that alone.
the story is good. I felt like like the story was following the story Swallowed Star but it took a turn from there. the writing is so so level, maybe you are a beginner,but I am expecting something good from this novel. maybe it will turn in better in the future. you have my support bud, continue writing
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