Read till Ch 334 and i have to say im extremely dissapointed with the author. It was one of the best novels i have read so far,interesting with good plots with a little bit of slice of life, BUT... in the newer chapters the author stretching the chapters like theres no tommorow with so much repetitive details that it becomes impossible to read with no story progression,it becomes a chore much less enjoyable. For example.. The protagonist tries to do something and had a thought....proceed to write 3 chapter explaining his thought with useless descriptions wHICH are so repetitive and boring. It could have been one of the best novel i would recommend to friends but i have to drop it now.
I can’t wait to see where this novel goes! LitOW is an incredible novel and my expectations are even higher for this one! Show us what you got Warmaisach!!!
Want everyone to know, some spoilers are mentioned.This is not a typical fight (or romance) of a three kingdoms setting. Nor does it seem to be a Romeo and Juliet thing. While some characters are developed early on, many are not flushed out until around the 800 mark. The world overview also tends to be over-simplified with vast overreaching vagueness. Some context is lost in translation and editing, along with those "Auto Correct" errors going by unnoticed. As for the thoughts, I feel that this story is only beginning to ramp up. As for specifics, I'll talk about more.First off are characters. As was mentioned, development is just slightly better than trash at the beginning. Some were given personality and others were just introduced with a vague background (Playboy, Wealthy, Common Person... etc). Point is, who was the real "villain" at the start? Clearly it felt like it was only building up the characters for the SIG story arc. Clearly, Kashawen is the overall villain thus far. Felt like she was thrown their and forgotten after the first Tita Star arc. Personal Thoughts are listed on Elite, Good (5* and 4*).Elite: Aina, Wang Zheng, Ye Zisu, Yan Xiaosu, Lin HuiyinGood: Zhang Shan, Runan, Meng Tian, Yue Jing, Snow Li, Ai XiaosluSecond (and Third) are both World Building and Story Development. There is really no way to separate them. Honestly, the loss at IG was actually a thought I had when I got to the selection for Solar System Federation. Seriously.That's not to say that it isn't good, but rather it seems fantastic when compared to other stories. The only downside I see is that there's no distinction between whose story is being told... There should be something to denote that (Author and Editor failure?). Otherwise, it feels like the underdog hero defeating opponents to win the princess' and in marriage... Wait there's one thing that I feel strongly about and that is this story is OBVIOUSLY centered on Wang Zheng's ascension to and reformation of the Rand Empire. If you go in depth, you understand that the nuance of all his breakthroughs are that the Rubik's Cube (and by extension, Bonehead and Charcoal) seem to be an amalgamation of all existing and future technologies and techniques. Within the last 50 chapters, this belief solidified even more so. Even better is the inferences that can be made from the title itself. The story is coming together as a whole which is why Development is higher than the World Building. Ideally, the only issue here is the complete trash excuse of WZ being sent to Tita (and consequently almost dying) just because Aina kissed him after "beating" Atlantis. Somehow though I managed to keep reading past that and wound up 50+ chapters a day.Overall, the translation can be read and could use some better editing. Updates do seem to be regular for now too.I would seriously recommend this to anyone s a must read and tell them to hang on between the IG and Elite Academy X arc. It just lacks a villain until SIG arc. Honest thoughts without much thinking though.
Hello fellow cultivators,Just wanted to update you guys that we have increased the updating speed to 6 chapters a week due to popular demand. Thank you for supporting us and showing the story some love. We will continue to work hard to translate better and faster.There will now be an update everyday except Thursdays.If you are a fan of the story and want early access to chapters or an even faster updating speed, please consider supporting us here: patreon.com/paintingofthenineimmortalsWe have set a few goals already, including bonus chapter releases and a permanent release increase to 7 chapters a week. Your support is completely voluntary but it is highly appreciated and very motivating :)Thanks for reading this mini-update. We will continue to read your comments and improve our work.
Updated review on this novel due to the Hiatus: It's a shame because I really liked this novel, but the author seemed to have gotten what I assume to be writer's block, or perhaps laziness/procrastination. First the break was only like a 5-day break, saying he'd be back on the Tuesday of 10/15/18, then on that Tuesday he secretly and quietly changed the Tuesday to Thursday, then on Thursday he made another update to say he'd be done by the end of the month of October because of his sisters wedding he had to do work for, and then at the end of October he updated it again to give him another week in November. And now a week into November it just says "I'll definitely be back soon"I think this all would be fine and all, people need their breaks, but seeing as how you keep changing the date without actually changing your "Update 10/18/2018" hoping that we wouldn't notice you silently changing the date back every so often is kind of a scummy move. If you need a half year break, just say so, but don't keep letting our hopes down by breaking your words and postponing the next chapter little by little each time
Not bad, it is even Good really. Some cliche but fairly well used. Different take on the whole monsters always obey the Demons thing that is always in these types of stories. Though it does have a System it is different from others in how it works. Give it a chance.
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