Great novel, Really love the character development the writing is great, just the world background is lacking, but I really do love the fresh character it's great, and even amazing. Love to see more chapters.
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its another trash, and another one of those stupid mc who didn't have a single bit of iq and doesnt know he's already the strongest and think his still a mortal just like the other copy paste of this novel
I once tried to read it... but it was too overpowering...It is what it the title says it is... don't read if you don't like OP Stories and if you compare with what you considered OP before it was just normal novels... compared to OP System
English is good. Even if it is not good, it's sufficient. This is my favorite genre, yet, I still stopped reading half way through .First, divide paragraphs. If it's this blocky on PC for me, I could imagine how unbearable it will look to mobile users. It's fine to leave two lines of gap between paragraphs. it looks alright. The story progression is good, keep at it, it will work out well.
The story indeed is one in a million. Jack feels he isn't against the law to have sex at his age with someone below his age but it seems to be against the law. Amanda on the other hand has a dream come true that she never dreamt of. Lights out is one of the best stories I've ever read and I'll like to continue to the next level.
I like This chapter and i alredy Check it out you new nove i like it very much Reborn as truhy side carecter i fan of this kind of novels and also you guys can check this novel out you like it too
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