Interstellar: exploring the cosmos with my anomaly system

Hey webnovel NEWSFLASH your readers who are almost exclusively Non-chinese don't appreciate Chinese Nationalism and racism. Baffles me how they let these kinds of novels through

Here's my promised review, it's good, it could use some work every now and then, and maybe a little longer chaps, but other than that, great job.

I feel this story is trying too hard at making the world to fascinating fantasy with simple things i could make it up to 50 without doing something else to make the cringe go away.this type of story building is not for me so way and the way they talk with each other is like they are talking to their in-laws family for the first time.

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hello I've just finished reading this book and I Like what I've seen so far( even though it is not much ) so I hope you can release more chapter for a better view and opinion on your book thanks

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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

This Novel sat in my Library for quite a while because of the negative comments ... a month ago I thought about giving it a shot ... it's true the writing quality is bad but it has improved a bit with time. Character development took OKish but it still requires quite a brushing ..... But the most disappointing thing is the use of Heavy Plot Armours .. repeatedly.. Certain bets and terms /deals were used according to the wordings " you have to follow every command of mine / I will own everything you have if I win " and people readily agrees ( People are not that stupid and these are not ordinary people who we are talking about but powerhouses! ) without thinking the pros-cons of such a deal . Take example of Yanagi , a senior at his institute and most the powerful youth , readily agreed to the term " you will obey every command ... " if one could interpret , it is similar to a slave contract ! , ( My words ) , it should be properly mentioned what " everything" means in this novel - everything could include ones money , property , Mana Fruits ,  and Weapons but it can also include ones time , body , soul , his wife / husband and family... a clear cut defination is Very much required .. And don't talk about the Plot Armours... if one is giving it a try.... they will surely understand what I mean ...While the chapters are relased frequently , this story is not my Cup of tea ...Dropping it ..