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I simply like the idea of the book, the development is going ok for now, and I wish he will focus just on globins, showing that with enough care a weak race can become strong enough to fight peak races like dragons, but I hope there will be a way to improve human power, if not they will day with just a slap from everything.If there is a raw around there... o.o

If you like History's Strongest Senior Brother, then this one is for you. If you didn't like it because it was too much wikipedia info dump about every single stupid thing, then like me, you won't like it. It's a complete chore to read and I'll only read it when I've grown tired of poking my eyes out for the day.

Very poor buildup. Rushed beyond compare and nothing is explained. A totally unreliable NEET MC dies from Weebing too hard apparently, and then becomes reliable, able to kill, smart, and good with girls after he transmigrates. He is the polar opposite of the previous body’s owner, and does multiple things totally out of character. It’s an interesting story design, but the execution is just garbage. I was hooked and spent about an hour or two reading more than I planned, but I kept cringing at the sudden unexplained changes and finally couldn’t handle any more.Points for the storyNone for the design

cry your mom out Thoughs of god in a detection of the brain of God who is not the best person you can do to be to a woman in the world and be to a shiny woman

There are allot of problems in this novel. Feels like wasted potential.First of the MC is stupid like almost brain dead when the author wants to make him out to be a genius. When in reality he is fucking retarded.He also gets walked over for the first 60+ chapters. The female "guardian" like the girl who is running the prison ****es him over a few times yet mc lets it go like noting happened.... Like totally forgotten not mentioned again. Lets not forget she helped in his execution, did not help him, beaten him half to death a few times, ****ed him over a few more times,....And MC lets it go like noting happened....For some reason mc asks her to join his "team" later. Are we supposed to forget all the shit she did to him?MC also acts arrogant for no reason when he is still a slave. Thinks he acts smug when he is still making money for the guy who killed him and acts all high and mighty for no reason.A few more problems are that the author makes allot of mistakes, and likes to keep the mc weak.MC levels up but author casually forgets about it and then lets mc level it up again and thus waste exp.And one of the biggest brain farts about this is when he finally uses his exp after not using it for no reason (to make the mc even more weak then he already is) he puts all his exp in like the slave "class" and then removes the class 30 minutes later (legit next chapter). So the author is just keeping mc weak for no reason and its really annoying at this point. Like imagine watching mc grind (even thou he is already stacking a shit ton exp but does not use it because "reasons") and then your reward is watching him basically delete the exp. And then he acts all high and mighty thinking he is a genius....Author also can't remember his Tiers, like T1 <25 / T2 25-50 / T3 ... Then he ****ed it up the next time becouse he can't remember what he said the previous chapter.Also the later chapters are full of useless system text stuff just to run up word count.Chapters are also really short, there is like no substance in the chapters except useless system info. For example mc walking then rest of the chapter is his stills that author never uses because he thinks it will be to confusing for him to remember....Also the R18 tag is a ?The only thing we got is that the guy who killed mc slept with the guardian (well that's in plied at least).All in all i'm super disapointed. I expected a badass MC but what we got is a whimp who gets walked all over and does not take revenge.I still can't belive he put all his exp in slave that he saved from like 25 chapters and then removes the class.Like i think this novel will turn out in a shitty hero saves the world kind of garbadge.Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐⭐Like MC is way to softhearted for this kind of novel I expected some dark stuff but mc can't even take revenge now so idk what it will turn out to be later in the novel. Also I think I read somewhere author does not want mc to be the owner of slaves??? LIke he can't be the reason for slaves? Are you for real what kind of garbage shit is that! Novel is full of slaves but mc can't own any? It should be one of his skills yet he can't be the reason for slaves .......Also the dark classes are supposed to be feared yet everyone and there Nan shits on mc. Its like author just forgot about the perks.I feel like there is no progression. MC should be a dark necromancer yet he kills no1 and only has "monsters" under his control why no humans?Also the caps are hard to read.

I actually quite liked the novel, until I read the others' reviews and found out this is a copy of the first order.There's no reason to read this as it'd be simply better to read the original. Hope this helped so that you don't waste your time

Good work, but I would like to say that, lich is a cuckold, I want everyone to know that he is a cuckold and has no dick, but the work is good, there is no translation into Portuguese, but it is good.

It's a good novel. If you look past the obviously rushed first chapter, there's nothing terrible about it.Writing quality 5*- Apart from the first few chapters, the grammar is good.  Even those first few chapters are better than a good majority of the novels I've read on here. Though the grammar could always improve, 5 stars, for now, seem appropriate. Stability of updates 5*- Simple. The author releases at least one chapter a day.Story development 5*- It's too early into the novel to really say but for now I think it's going in the right direction.Character design 5*- Is going in the right direction. The characters and their reactions are genuine enough for a work of fiction and I got nothing to complain about. I enjoy Johnathan and the other twos characters. I also like their powers. Again, I have nothing to complain about. World Background 4*- This is by far the worst thing in this novel. However, that's compared to everything I reviewed so far. The world-building isn't bad but so far nothing's really shown how the world changed since the start. But I can understand why nothings really been said. in the novel, not much time has passed. Around 1 or 2 days. Which isn't long at all. So I have hope that once more time passes, the author will explain how everything changed and focus more on world-building.So that is my review. I hope this is helpful to those who are hesitant or are debating on whether to read. It's a good novel, but it's a bit early to decide and give a definite score. However, everything said, I believe the novel is quite promising. With the small teasers the author gave in the beginning, I doubt it'll only be zombies. Overall, I say this novel is a 4.8. It could go up or down, but for now, I say it's a reasonable score. Thanks for reading, and Author, I hope you keep up the good work. I do suggest rewriting the first chapter and extending it so it's less rushed and more natural.