Infinite Gameplay

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I'll be honest, but the first initial chapters were a bit of a struggle to read. Maybe because of the grammatical mistakes and misuse on tenses and adverbs. Not to add, I noticed that the author tends to be redundant too. And that made my eyes feel tired. (Imagine reading a paragraph that repeated the word "kill", "left", "walks" 5+ times) Although there was a slight improvement from chapter 13 onwards, I recommend that the author should be vigilant on proofreading and improving on your vocabulary to remedy that.

Lore-wise, I like how the author thought about how to make his "system" uniquely his by adding his own touch. I liked the way how he fashioned the quest part especially.

The Story & Characters though... is a bit lacklustre. Either that or the pacing was a bit off. Especially when it came to the MC's interaction with the opposite gender. I really saw him as a thirsty dude despite his dialogues were rational sometimes. Also the murdering parts and the implied pinning (well it is a harem) were a little awkward and robotic. I think using realistic references and putting genuine emotions would make those better.

Although I pity Kite for being thrown into the fray of the system but still, some parts on his character development may need work since I don't feel that attached to him. (or maybe because I got irked on some of his questionable actions)

It is a great systems novel!
There is only 5 chapter so far and it is created very well. The story is enjoyable, and the introduction is done effectively. The world created seems very diverse and rich.
The author definitely has done his/her research making the world seem very much like, and RPG game, but there are other elements, which are new and not seen before making the world unique.
The writing quality and grammar are decent, some minor mistakes that can easily be solved after a reread.
The MC is described well and you already get a feel of him in the first 5 chapters. I am sure we will learn more about him as the story progresses.
Well done! I will continue reading this enjoyable story.

This is superb! I love transmigration, fantasy, action, and adventure stories.  This one is such a complete package! The game like setting and the system were additions that got my interest the most. I like the MC, though he was thrown in a different world without any warning, still he remained strong. The plot is amazing. Looking forward for more.

This story is not bad, it is far from what I expected. The story is not for me at all.
It is interesting for people who like stories like this, and your world building is very good. You have a nice writing style that keeps people in.
The problem is the grammar, if you reread through your story, you can easily find them. But the grammar mistakes are small and doesn’t throw off the story.
Unfortunately this story is not for me, but for the people is will enjoy the story.

This a great systems novel and I highly recommend it. Just reading the book makes you feel like you're in the world. The author has clearly done a lot of research before writing this novel because everything seems like an RPG games. I love the development of the story and the character Kite. I don't typically read system novels but this has really opened up my interests in system novels. Keep up the consistent uploads author! I love it! - ClumsyPanda[img=recommend]

Games novel aren't my genre but I'm slowly trying to get into it. I guess if the author keep updating better and more chapters every day then I'll really fall into this genre. I really love the idea and concept that the author is writing in his book with games which is very hard in fact since it requires more creative than another genre, so I really hope to read more chapters.

Overall, it's pretty good and definitely a fun read. The system isn't the most helpful or very complex but I'm still in the early stages of the story. Instead of flooding readers with a bunch of information, the author makes the smart choice to push on with the narrative.

Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters.

The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.