Games novel aren't my genre but I'm slowly trying to get into it. I guess if the author keep updating better and more chapters every day then I'll really fall into this genre. I really love the idea and concept that the author is writing in his book with games which is very hard in fact since it requires more creative than another genre, so I really hope to read more chapters.
A hooking synopsis and interesting character design. The world that the author built here is truly fascinating. Character interaction is also well-written and the very concept of this story is intriguing. Good luck, author! Keep up the hard work!
It's good. There's a large focus on development and levelling up and is overall an interesting story with unique dialogue and characters that bounce off well from each other. It's a fun story to read and be entertained by.
This story is not bad, it is far from what I expected. The story is not for me at all.
It is interesting for people who like stories like this, and your world building is very good. You have a nice writing style that keeps people in.
The problem is the grammar, if you reread through your story, you can easily find them. But the grammar mistakes are small and doesn’t throw off the story.
Unfortunately this story is not for me, but for the people is will enjoy the story.
This a great systems novel and I highly recommend it. Just reading the book makes you feel like you're in the world. The author has clearly done a lot of research before writing this novel because everything seems like an RPG games. I love the development of the story and the character Kite. I don't typically read system novels but this has really opened up my interests in system novels. Keep up the consistent uploads author! I love it! - ClumsyPanda[img=recommend]
Overall, it's pretty good and definitely a fun read. The system isn't the most helpful or very complex but I'm still in the early stages of the story. Instead of flooding readers with a bunch of information, the author makes the smart choice to push on with the narrative.
Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters.
The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.
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It is interesting for people who like stories like this, and your world building is very good. You have a nice writing style that keeps people in.
The problem is the grammar, if you reread through your story, you can easily find them. But the grammar mistakes are small and doesn’t throw off the story.
Unfortunately this story is not for me, but for the people is will enjoy the story.
Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters.
The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.
The only part I was a little uncomfortable with is him sleeping with different women. That just isn’t my cup of tea.
However, I do wish you the best for your writing and keep up the good work author !