Writing quality can be better without the shortcuts of words sometimes. Words like nvm and btw just feels wrong when reading a book. Ik its easier and all that and everyone understand the meaning but it just feels wrong and could take down a lot in quality.Story development is to early to say something about at the moment. Character design is good about a 4 star id say. Explanations about characters could be made better, but overall design is quite good.The world building is also too early to say much about. The world building is a slow subject that should take time and many chapters that you dont have at the moment😅 Good read id say but could be better. Ik you want to make the best book you can and i hope you can make a much better storyline in the future when i come back for a reread. Hope you make a great book author.
I love how the novel is being described. I love the main character already, love the world building and the fact that it's even a dragon novel .Overall this novel has a great potential. keep it up dear author.
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