Aside from the obvious problems being the grammar( which at the my current chapter 221, has gotten much better then the beginning) this novel is actually really good and fun to read honestly author has mentioned repeatedly that hes not a native English speaker and also cant hire an editor so I can't be too harsh considering the story is really good and intriguingmc is good, a little weird in the beginning but once things gets rolling he becomes much better.some of the FL so far are a bit generic innocent lovey bombshells (diya,jasmine, natasha) although diya's character is becoming more interesting recently with her plot developmentsthe backstory with xiao feng and mc and the past forgotten by mc is also pretty interesting All in all if you can look past the grammar and whatnot this is really a hidden gem that has potential enough to trump some of the "top rated" swill on this app Great Work keep it up !!
The recent chapters are absolutely unacceptable, please do something Qidian, the grammar is dreadful. Just mistake upon mistake, which really kills this wonderful novel. And thst costs spirit stones!
I think you've got a really interesting story here, so keep up the good work! I think being a little more descriptive with certain scenes would be helpful, and more frequent updates would be nice, but overall, you're doing great.
Ok I read all the free chapters and just gotta say that the mc is a total simp, he has a system that is way more op than the one in I’m really a superstar but lacks any kind of self improvement and just does whatever his sister says, basically he is only using the system to benefit his sister
This book is an amazing piece of art just like the authors other works. This book makes me wish that the author had the shadow clone jutsu because I can't seem to get enough of it and would like to wake up one day with a 100 updates. That is the dream. I would highly recommend it as well as the authors other works.
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