In the Light of You

"I am your girlfriend, I've been your girlfriend for years now. Why don't you remember?"

You'll never shine if you don't glow

I really love the story but the chapter 2 and 3 is a bit confusing to me too so i gave the story development a 4 star rating but I really recommend this to my friends for real!!

I have no words you write long chapters that all connecting stories the bits in the beginning are a little eh but otherwise the story is amazing it's about a cat

Your dedication and hard work are truly impressive and deserving of recognition. Keep up the excellent work! 👍🙌 With a bit more practice, you can enhance your writing skills even further. We all believe in you!

Actually very interesting plot , same with characters but make it unique more use different methods to elevate your imagination  and let it take you to heightsss.Not a very good story but a readable if you have time

good start, keep it up authors, i love the character and world building <3