In Another World As A Slime

Although the starting story is common but the story develops nicely after… a good read with a little suspense..

Author cant keep a single thought on track, 11 chapters in and all we get is some random bs, no world building, and he cant even keep the characters names or what is around in check, also theres 2 dragons that have been introduced, so far but yet the author cant even keep track of that either.......

The story has an intriguing premise? but it suffers from slow pacing and overly detailed descriptions. The characters show promise, but their development is hindered by the lack of dialogue and interaction, The world background is vague, leaving many question unanswerd. Overall, the story has potential, but it needs more refinement.

No pressure but this novel should be the best with Yuri tag on this app right now good luck author 😂

You drop this?                          

I thought I was tired of life but then I came across this work. It was the best thing I've ever read. I hope the author gets more recognition. Symphony of Darkness>Reverand Insanity and your favs...