In Another Life || Taekook||

Wow, Serena Harry picks the best setting every time. Nice work. ...

This book is like an mmorpg but in real life with high stakes like death,in this story we follow a young talented kid named aren who goes in as a person in poverty but quickly excels in the new world he is in where he fights monsters and does quests to level up,in most mmo style games youll chose a class but in this everyone gets to choose from three paths that were chosen because they were suitable for the person every path is unique so you wont find two people with the same abilities i could go on but we would be getting into spoiler territory if I did so ill stop here thank you for reading.

Too much details, it's too irritating to read, please author, reduce the details by removing the unecessary ones and only focus on the plot, chapter 27 in but the plot doesn't forward at all, over 10 chapters of useless and unecessary details that even if you skip it, you can still know the plot overall. DON'T PAD THE WORD COUNT BY UNECESSARY DETAILS...

Solid pick based on 102 chapters. The author improved after his last novel. While this one's pace is also slow and down to the ground, the MC there seems to have a better personality, earns things by himself instead of being indebted/burdened by clan, he gets his action time and comes out with a satisfying result, the side characters such as the girl are more interesting too and could indeed make up for interesting relations and situations years later. Author's interesting note after chapter 102:,,As I said in the previous chapter, I abandoned a lot of constraints to write this book, and wrote it completely according to my own ideas, and I will no longer be influenced by anyone's opinions!If you don’t like to read it, you think it’s poisonous here, and there’s something unreasonable, please do it yourself. The starting point is such a large library, you can always find something that suits your heart. Or you can try to write a book you want, saying Maybe it will be a hit, and it will be a mortal one!I am actually very disgusted that some people say that my plot is unreasonable here, and there are many loopholes, because I am actually very concerned about the rationality of the plot and the self-consistency of logic. People who say this will make me more angry than directly scolding me for throwing on the street. Makes me feel like an insult to my writing!In the previous episodes of Lin Xiaoe, one by one shouted poison, and shouted that the little white dog gave up the book, and I laughed. I have read books for so many years, I don't know that there are many books with this kind of plot?But how many books did I deal with later?And I think this plot is handled very well, because she is used as a point to give the protagonist the first magic weapon, some life-saving charms, medicinal pills, including the following charts, which opens up a new situation, and more later Do a good job of the outline of the new plot.This kind of writing with dots and lines is exactly what I am good at and what I like.The so-called old bottle of new wine, the development of online literature to the present, if you want to say who has written a plot, no one else has written it before, that is impossible, and the creator can only slightly modify and innovate some plots.Just like domestic music, it is not because the predecessors have written all the lyrics and tunes that are easy to create, and now it is more and more difficult to introduce such classic songs.Besides, why is the protagonist an aboriginal?In the first two books, I chose a transmigrator protagonist, and then I found that although a transmigrator is easy to arouse readers' approval at first, the disadvantages will appear as the plot unfolds later.Once the protagonist encounters someone who wants to plot against him, but the protagonist doesn't see it, many readers will jump out and say that the protagonist is stupid, why is it so easy to trust people, and it's a transmigrator, they don't know anything!I really don't know how to explain it!Are there many examples of being deceived in reality? How many people who think they are smart don't know when they are being lied to?There is a good joke that you are not deceived, just because you are not worth being deceived.When those professional liars really want to deceive you face to face, you can't prevent it!Today's novel readers, many of them read a lot of books, they all know astronomy and geography, and know everything about ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and they are all transparent about the world. In their eyes, the protagonist of the transmigrator should be like this.But I really want to ask a question, even if you pass through and get the golden finger, can you really understand people's hearts? Then you can see from someone else's word or action that someone wants to hurt you? Then immediately preemptively kill others?There is no doubt that God's perspective is cool, but in the Xianxia world, especially in the mortal world view of Xianxia, ​​God's perspective has become an obstacle that greatly affects the author's writing, at least for me.So I chose a native who would persuade many people at the beginning, an aboriginal who grew up from an orphan, an aboriginal protagonist who would make mistakes, correct them, and learn from them."

That is a lot work for fried chicken. But seriously the beginning makes me craving fried chicken lol.Anyway, I like it. This feels like a light-hearted story but eventually became a serious (business story?) one. I give solid 5* and a bucket of fried chicken to the author

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Is the arnis is Filipino reference of the martial arts?Anyway, it has a great start. There is a problem actually.I guess to make this story longer is to explain the setting that would makes us/readers join in your worldBut good job! For the new writer 😅😅

nice good story. keep writing. nice good work