Honestly, I can't help but give this a one hundred percent 5 star review because this is just that good. I mean it has awesome characters and an amazing concept for a story. I myself personally have grown numb to the amount of OP protagonists that are always so fucking dark I mean, don't get me wrong I love those but this is just a nice refreshing change of pace for once. You can tell that the story doesn't take itself too seriously all the time which usually Boggs down a lot of stories. But this has a happy go lucky vibe throughout so that makes the moments where it hits you with something truly tragic or ****ed up it's a lot more impactful.
The title should be changed from "Fantasy: I can instantly comprehend everything" to "Fantasy: I always date with my junior sister" or "Fantasy: My junior sister always harass me"
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If he's going to start from scratch, why did we read so many chapters? I could understand if he did it in the middle of the story, maybe the main character would have gotten a little stronger by thenbut what's the point of starting over when the character is at their weakestit's like he didn't like the starting city and imposed 10-20 chapters on us so he could rewrite it
Nadran suddenly felt his stomach rumble. [It seems like all that exercise made me hungry.] "I'm going to go eat," Nadran mentioned, then turned and walked away. [That girl didn't ask anything of me. Maybe she really didn't have an ulterior motive… no, impossible. I must just not be able to understand it right now.]
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