I would have to say, This is very Good, nice plot, a whole new experience like, come on, a world of the dead? Everything is on point, however there might be a few mistakes in phrases and punctuation, which bothers me a bit, but Everything is fine! Keep up the good work author! Im awaiting the next ones!
.......................................................................Awesome continue to embark on this dao,.......................................................................
This is arguably the best smut novel on the entire platform. The charcters, the scenes, the story everything is well thought. The R-18 chapters are balanced and honestly this novel deserves more credit. Good work author-sama.
It's weird hearing people call him Victor when everyone name is Chinese.The Synopsis,Mc is called Lin Yi.Then, translator changed it to Victor.Wtf, seriously why changed the name.
There is a lot of potential for this story, but the quality of writing detracts so much from the overall novel it becomes almost unreadable. - Switching between past and present tense, grammar and punctuation errors abound.- The sentence structure itself in many paragraphs is broken or reversed.This has the working of a great novel, but it needs some love and care - an editor could make this novel so much better.Even if the author put it into word and grammarly it could make a huge difference.
I hope and wish you update time will not killing me slowly T,TJust like You other novel , they story and novel is great but male me lile to dropped cause the release date , pay to read is okey but if one month just 15 chptr it was my lose
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