this book is literally the worst awespec novel written....the main character is only alive because of plot amor...the villains make stupid choices despite being in high levels of cultivation (and the list goes on) this book is a waste of time👎
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation..I think I already read this story before, and it already finished/ending.. But I still like to read this story..I like this kind of story.. And I can say that this story is one of my favourites Naruto fanfiction..Please continue this story until finished 🙏🙏Love your story.. Keep up the great work author san 😁👍😍😍😍
This is the perfect Slice Of Life.There are some dumb people who think the novel has to be done everything new. But Slice Of Life is cliches placed together. And the Author write the novel in a way that make these cliches look awesome!If you are looking for something with a slow pace and amazing characters, this is the novel for you!The characters have profundity and resemble anime characters.There are no FaceSlapping or Nationalism.So don’t worry about reading these boring stuff.
if possible, make the mc have a steadier or calm character.you can also make it the character to be funnier.the character the mc displays is a little worrying, you can't allow him to be courting death all the time right?he is to egoistic, arrogant....This is just my advice, I also hope your novel gets picked
MC is too passive. He no life’ a game for 10 years then when the game world merged with the real world, he became the strongest in the world. Only he went back to the menial joke he worked instead of planning for the day when raid bosses starts to appear. Meanwhile, the world is falling apart because the law can’t be enforced on evil immortals and the appearance of raid bosses that are on his level. All the problems he faces are due to his own inaction early on, only to end up having to solve it later.
Shameless 5 star author review!!!!! Glad you were able to stop by and take a look at this book! I take my inspiration from the Legendary Mechanic and The Strongest Sword God. Both of these books kept me up all night for weeks on end and now I'm getting revenge by making a book that will do the same!!!! Muahahaha.Seriously though, expect intense action and world building on two ends, both I. Socrathia and on Earth. Our MC may have the knowledge of the future but that's not going to make things easy for him.I will do my best to add the reviewers and commentators thoughts into the book, and let's explore this VRMMORPG and post apocalyptic world together!!!!
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