Immortal Yet Powerful

Wow! Talents are everywhere but this one is unique. I got hooked... very interesting book, MUST READ.

the pilot is good and it's promising story. will look forward to more of the story. The opening was different considering some. i think the story will have good oncoming chapters

Not sure if this novel has a future. The only thing that I can see happening is him being op and the other people exclaiming about it for 300+ chapters. Rinse and repeat. There is no substance here. Read Reincarnation of the Sword God if you want something with some substance. Translation quality is decent though.

This novel is from author of Warlock of magus world and carefree path of dreams, so you can expect logical, rational, smart and cautious mc. As author took inspiration from LOM so world building is pretty decent.....Similar to author's previous work, main character seems to lack romantic feeling.Focus of the novel is mostly on fighting and the MC's journey through the ranks with the help of some kind of cheat.If you enjoyed author's previous work then chances are pretty high that you will enjoy this...btw use coins to unlock at least 1 chapter to be counted as 'Fans' so they'd be pick this up quicker.

Dear ultra, I gave you 5 stars for the sake of encouraging you. However, be reminded that no work is perfect and you have a long way to go in terms of storytelling.Although I understand Jack's bewilderment when he was not recorded as a hero, added to the fact that he woke up 1500 years into the future, he's quite an unreasonable character who lets his emotions overtake his rationality. And that is considering that he was a great hero. It's hard for me to believe that he's one when he acts so immaturely. Other than Jack, no other characters stood out to me since they have no unique propensities that would make me remember them. Perhaps I'm being picky, but that's the actuality when I was reading the book. Perhaps it's because it was not elucidated properly, the world setting and the magic/levelling up system is quite hazy. I do know that you can level up by killing another living creature. Though, that dismisses some laws governed by nature. Instead of encouraging one to level up, the levelling up system encourages killing to grow strong. Since this is a novel that focuses on action, I would appreciate if the fight scenes are narrated in an extensive way, focusing on muscle/limb/eye movements and the altercation itself. It's quite an evasion on using mere onomatopoeias in narrating rather than actual movements. The exposition is quite lacking, if I may say. You often use adjective in describing things. Utilize the wonders of prose. Adeptly use figures of speech. Make the readers read what you're actually seeing in your mind. Also, I have qualms in the changing of POVs. I think it would be alright to stick to one POV, the omniscient one. In that way, you will be able to show Jack's thoughts and what's happening around him. Regarding the grammatical aspects of the story, I've noticed several mistakes. There were a lot of missing/misused punctuation marks leading to run-ons, incorrect verb tenses, absent modifiers, and questionable word choices. Withal, heed my words that these can be proofread really easily. I just pointed them out to let you know that your work could look even more beautiful. Furthermore, divide your condensed paragraphs. It's quite tiring to read such thick passages, and readers tend to skip something like them. Overall, the elements are quite dichotomized. I think you could merge the ideas a little more. Rest assured that you're potential as a writer will still grow. I will be supporting you! [Sorry for leaving such a bad review]

The misunderstandings is really entertaining for me. Even tough sometimes really pain in the a55. I Hope the MC get little more smarter and more harem... kekkekekekek.

Over all writing quality is good with very few grammar errors. Story development is pretty good. You can't really predict what will happen next so far and it is enjoyable to read. Character development is also really good they each have unique personalities and some even have different ones so to speak depending on various situations. Update stability was good it's been 3days since the last update so I don't know if he is taking a break or what. world background is pretty dam good so far all things considered for how few chapters there are and how he has not even fully explored the island yet!

the story is really interesting, the world is practically alive on it's own(the tutorial part is a bit too close to the tutorial arc of The Second Coming of Gluttony for comfort tho). My main problem here are the characters cause they are too unreasonable or completely not self aware(this may be a bit comedic at times tho), the unreasonableness is my main problem cause at times it's just not that needed or is every person on the tutorial a criminal before being reborn ? Cause dudes have not even a slight of reasonable common sense. Even the big bad villain is actually a spoiled brat that thinks he's the smartest person alive. Also it just makes no sense that the tutorial becomes an absolute bloodbath when they are literally scrapping every soldier they can to hold their defense positions, they just needed to have a bit of supervision on the first floor, just a bit and they would have 300 or so more soldiers even if just cannonfolder, but beggars can't be choosers and they clearly NEED more soldiers to remain holding their forts, it just makes no sense that they just don't care about loosing 300 potential soldiers cause of stupid stuff. Anyway mostly me ranting but it just became too unbearable to remain reading without even complaining a bit about these stuff.