Review as at chapter 20
It's a calming read. The idea of an immortal shopping mall is refreshing and the idea that Lin has let the other cultivators start their own business or just hang around in there is a good take unlike the common indifferent trope store owners usually have in these types of novels.
I'd appreciate more interaction among the cultivators , go deeper play around with it and even the different types of businesses they have opened. For that lively wholesome mall feel the characters need to be more interactive and fleshed out.
But all in all it's a good novel with potential all the best in the trails ahead and hopefully Lin Feng gets the option to buy cultivation knowledge and not just increase his realm.
I don’t mind Axel groveling a bit but don’t want him to miss out on his mate. More for Ashley not miss out on her mate (Axel does seem serious about her now).
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It's a calming read. The idea of an immortal shopping mall is refreshing and the idea that Lin has let the other cultivators start their own business or just hang around in there is a good take unlike the common indifferent trope store owners usually have in these types of novels.
I'd appreciate more interaction among the cultivators , go deeper play around with it and even the different types of businesses they have opened. For that lively wholesome mall feel the characters need to be more interactive and fleshed out.
But all in all it's a good novel with potential all the best in the trails ahead and hopefully Lin Feng gets the option to buy cultivation knowledge and not just increase his realm.
The characters are well made, but a little bare on backstory though there are only 20 chapters thus far so that could change.
Im very excited to see where this story will go!