Immortal Cultivation World: "Trash" Talent but Supreme Understanding

Your invitation kept me wild

"Shit-" Akira murmured under his breath as he looked at his watch- 6:02pm

"She's really nice," cut him off Jin.

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Mapang-insultong tingin pa ay nilubayan na siya ni Dorothy. She doesn't want to make a scene there. Even if they degrade her sense of fashion, she doesnt care. She is comfortable with it. As long as everyone believed and supported her, she will stand on it. Besides, she was known for it, why a shame?

Ares reached his arms out taking hold of the flailing wings that had sprouted from the teen's back. They began to calm as his shadowy arms melded into the charcoal skin they were made of. He felt them in his own mind, as if they were his own.

1.)A child of Senju and Uchiha that is enough to f- up everything unless he is taken to root or stolen by Orochimaru. He must be taken to root even without chakra and Zetsu would taken him during his birth maybe taken his mom before birth. 2) Senju clan and the name Senju was disbanded. I have no idea how so much OC Senju is popping up. 3) Transforming MC's clone to chakra metal sword by transformation justu? Hold up, wait a minute, something isn't right. 4) Chapters are too short and lack depth. 5) Dialogue is somewhat lifeless and low quality a.i - ish. 6) Pace is slow, too slow. you can easily skim and skip most of the chapter as far as I've read. 3-6 chapter can easily be condensed to one chapter. ************Writing Quality 3. Story Development 2. Character Design 2, Updating Stability 5, World Background 2.Writer-san your chapters are too short yet filled up with water and pace of story is too slow. MC is extremely naive to the point of being unlikeable also a little bit of pushover not an endearing quality in any kind of MC. OG Naruto has many plot holes, but your story started with a plot hole Senju father with enormous pool of chakra and contradiction Uchiha mother. Anyway with best wishes to you and your story ( At least you had the balls to write and publish you ff). Bye have fun and live happily.

kinda peak fiction, reminds me a lot of jujutsu kaisen, evangelion, and black clover. if it continutes being good, keep reading. hopefully it can forge more of a identity, since stuff like it can be really tropey. goated

More chapters, please. I need more. I can't get enough.

This seems really interesting! I’m going to wait for more chapters so I can binge it, lol.Author, how many chapters do you think you will eventually publish? Do you have an estimate?