It’s probably not really worth 5 stars but I like these kinds of stories and there aren’t many of them.. the translation is good enough, the system is a bit extreme but so far quite fun
The mc is as bland as it gets.The story is mediocre at best.I wouldn't say it's bad but it's not good either.I won't read it because the mc is going all in on defense even though he doesn't really need to. (like no weapon but only a shield if he level ups all points are put in constitution).All in all i don't really enjoy this novel
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The story is just starting, so it’s hard to predict how the plot will go and how detailed it could be. But I’d say that the punctuation and grammar does make me confused sometimes. If you need any help, I’ll try to point out some things. Although, don’t get discouraged ! We all start from somewhere, and I think you have a very good world build, which was my weakest point when I first starting writing. So keep up the good work author !
did you drop this story??................................................................................................................................
I would like to say " this novel is not great but still it's a great" (?) (Idk what I'm sayin xD) Anyway If you like fast paced novel, almost no necessary drama as far as I know, Kingdom building progression ,Cultivation (?) less dialogues more narrations it like I'm reading a summarize biography/history which is great that could save your time reading (it's worth it) and also even if you dislike harem I think you still like this novel where theres no necessary drama, there's romance elements but it feels like there's none at same time because of lack of relationship developments and dialogues (summarized) so you could enjoy it also for harem lovers you still also like based on my expirience reading this novel. I hope author will gonna make it through the end I like this novel and pls don't change your writing style on this novel and still the same .
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