Comedy gold! I've read till the latest chapter and I want more! I don't know what else to say other than saying this novel is just perfect. The comedy-action and the characters are so on point. The romance part makes me kinda jealous, to be honest. 5/5 no doubt! I will wait for the next update!
The beginning of the story was confusing for me but it cleared up around the end of the first volume, I assume the author was in the process of rewriting the early chaps. The main character is a very fleshed out persona and is surprisingly not too overpowered considering it's a system novel. The characters such as the mage and Kira have so much depth its suprising from an ******* author. The pacing is good and his portrayal of a psychopath is top notch. My only qualmn is the lack of description of the world itself, his background history is very good but when he just says a swamp town it leaves me unable to picture the scene in my head. Over all I highly recommend this book even though it went premium, after all, a small price to pay for sal- *cough*, quality.
like a lot plz continue ............... expecting alot hope mc reach his dream i eabt to also see how he will use his...programming skill..... mc parents are best but hope they also get a lot screen time...
Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ".Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" .*squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
Thank you author for your effort and this story. The story kept me going chapter after chapter. I have yet to finish hence picking it up to my reading list and dropping you my review. Here are my comments1. The whole story built up is commendable - truly well done from the start of how villin witnessed the death of the boy’s parents and taken in by the Silver to how he was trained until he enter the academy. The background to him attaining the different level of knowlege of a magus is well described 2. Creativity in plot and ability to draw the description of scenes allowing users to visualise clearly. As i read the chapters i am able to visualize each scene clearly. Eg. how the academy looks like, the classes, the time when Villin touch the crystal to his awakening, the corridor to the classes, the battle between Aiden and Amelia, the attack from Rolland to Villin - i could visualise it clearly as a result of the vivid description including the “test” set out by Pompei for his students how the fire ball went towards Kayley and Villin. Also the part where Villin fixed the crystal holder in class.3. Content structure. It takes a lot to think through the content for such magical realm and world - this is done well and delivered effectively by the author from the use of wands, to web nodes awakening to wandless curses and spells. The classes and grades and lessons that are taught - i enjoy reading and deciphering these content. 4. Peak and story climax - i am reading from competitive student battle (aiden and amelia, Villin and his oponent on crease and cut) more and more exciting part from attacks to battles and surprises - this leaves readers stuck on the narrative turning one chapter to another - good manouvering on the plot leaving trails of excitement here and there. Absolutely a must read for Harry Porter fans alike or magical fantasy - great built up of the entire world of magic. Look forward to read how Villin’s character will further evolve into and perhaps mega battle of the magical kingdom and forces to come. Good job author in putting in the effort for book. Keep up the good work!
To everyone, I have a question: How do you delete a novel after you written it because I'n sure some of you have seen the novel Secrets Of Existence so I want to remove it because I accidently created a story while thinking for a name which I came up with later called Lord of All Existence. Anyway since it is my frist ever novel written by me. Please take care of me and please for whatever person, thing or culture you find precious, don't judge me too harshly. Cause I'm under pressure and am only a Graduating N Level Student.
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