Your story is interesting, great background and plot, i think your Mc is really nice too, yes, it has one and two grammatical errors, but that is normal, i expect to see more chaps and you did a great job overall amazing story.
I'm not particularly convinced...But I'm still gonna read it till ch 10 at least, just to see if it develops in something decent.I think the idea of a gourmet system per se isn't bad, but it doesn't seem to be exactly what I was expecting, but there again, I just started... I'm gonna re-evaluate it later
A not-so shameless author review here! Let's go straight to the point, first of all, the book is filled with info dumps, that much I can say but the premium chaps have so much lesser than the free ones, you can say that it's some kind of growth in my part as an author. Second, I made a huge blunder of including 20+ chaps of backstory on the main storyline, I know, it ruined the reader's immersive experience with the MC in the story, and I am truly apologetic for that as I indeed regret doing such a thing, if only I could go back in time then I would've uploaded them on a separate volume instead, what a pity! Third, as of now, I am still working to the best of my abilities to improve myself as an author and I think you would be able to see these improvements if you read on? Not entirely sure though, hehe. Finally, the author is super lazy and often procrastinates in socmed to relieve boredom and avoid their writing responsibilities, so if you happen to have socmeds as well, why not motivate(scold) me there by dm'ing one of my accounts? That's all, take care and happy reading!
This is the long explanation go down to get the short version:This one was pretty mediocre and not that intresting but obviously it will get chosen out of all the other new novels that are more interesting if you look at the amount of people that are paying to read this anyway this novel uses what's already known to work and just changes a few things but it gets the work done so now qidian has become a echo chamber of these already established plots and theme Short version:I dont like this
Afraid of the dark? perhaps not a book for you. astral projection or dream walking to strange lands with stranger creatures and beings. will the boogeyman follow you back to the waking world? should be a fun read for those looking for a bit of Halloween fun.
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