Good book. It has 10 chapters and got slow pace. I hope things pick up speed on the next chapters. The world is modern setting and turned into a game world.
Poor thing, he died and reincarnate to a world that had similarities to the game he's developing to begun with.What made me laugh is that he bled from rabbits attack. Well... he chosen elf race and had started adventuring.Fighting monsters and now a boss level thingy.Funny goddess and author made her a pretty one.Story is good, well let's see how many chapters did author planned ahead for us!
This is a really good book and I like the characters ( cause their personalities and the shit they do are pretty relatable) but if he’s streaming I think it would be great if you just give some highlights of the games like you’re currently doing and if we have fight scenes in the near future don’t extend it for like 7 chapter (like some other books I know of) as it would be a major turnoff. The pace is good and he’s not hunting for pok-cough I mean women so that’s nice. I think there should be a little more world background as we don’t know much about it but it’s nice to read overall and easy on the eyes.
Its just bad really bad that's all I can say how the ratings are so high is beyond me lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
An interesting concept though the writing needs a little polishing I suggest Grammarly, helps with my own atrocious writing, you perhaps went a little over the top with the rape and selling of children perhaps dial down his cruelty a little or redirect it 2 fold to adults it makes it more endearing.
I'm waiting for update, I like historical novels, please do your updates soon as possible. I wish this will have a happy ending. Wish you good luck my friend. This is the first time I'm
The way the author set up the world was fantastic and sort of fast paced but it was well done. It is just started so I won't give it a 5 star review I might change it once more content is added. But so far the story has been great it gave a small backstory on the character and set up the plot rather nicely it just has 8 chapter so far from the time of my review but I give it a 4+ hopefully the author explains the world and it's cultivation so it won't be another martial God asura
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