If You Don’t Become the Main Character, You’ll Die

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I love how you designed the characters.  Most of the time our lives change but if we don't take control life ends up changing us sometimes even to all sorts of worst kinds. You got everything well portrayed. Keep it up!

This is really good novelGreat potentialThe only thing is that it speeding the novel to fast and the chapter are a little shortBut then other than that it pretty good

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Aslan looked over with wide eyes and said, "give me the peach first and I will tell you"

It was a fun read. It was slow in the beginning but I enjoyed it. The writing quality needs little editing. Sometimes you write information which is of no use. Like I was confused who was speaking. Try to cut down few sentences.Overall, I really liked the characters you introduced. I only read few chapters so I can’t comment but if I have time I’ll keep reading and then write full review.All the best author.

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This is definitely the best book I have read so far ! A must read novel !