I have very high hopes for this novel. I have consistently found the novels with a system like this such as Gourmet of Another World and Gourmet Food Supplier to be very entertaining and a good read. If this novel also hits it off like GOAW and GFS, they will be the holy trifecta of system novels in my opinion. It is too soon to say anything about criticisms so far, but there are many things I am worried about. A) Introducing the best friend character as a fatty worries me. These novels work best with lots of creativity and not too many cliches following. The fatty best friend is so common that it would be fine to call it a cliche. This could indicate a laziness on the behalf of the author, but as I said, it is too soon to tell.B) The main character does not seem to have a presence at all. In these novels, the importance lies in the main character and the side characters and world building. However, the main character despite being a person from our world seems to blend in too well and does not differentiate himself well from the surrounding people of the world. GFS has returning side characters and much more people interactions with less world building while GOAW has more world expansion/building, but less meaningful character interaction. It is too soon to tell, but the MC in this novel does not make himself stand out to me in anyway and it takes time to build the world or make side characters a regular part of the novel. So far, no meaningful character interactions have occurred.C)Would there be any way for this novel to make itself stand out from GOAW or GFS is a big question that I have. If it just follows the paths of GOAW or GFS without differentiating itself, I think it would be a let down of its potential. TLDR: hyped, but worried about how it will set itself apart from GOAW or GFS.
I binge read this story because it was so good please keep wring it it is a amazing story. I love Harry’s character in this and I feel it’s a very amazing story.
The atmosphere in the living area was gloom, as everyone felt somehow down and dejected. The room was quiet when suddenly a loud siren rang so loud, taking everyone's attention. Then a mirage of a man appeared in the center of the room, taking everybody by surprise.
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Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
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