"A captivating tale of healing and adventure!"The interactions between the protagonist and the slimes are heartwarming, while the thrilling plot keeps readers on the edge of their seats.
This is a review to let you know what you're getting into. For starters, I want to appreciate those who've left comments and reviews that are helpful. The writing quality isn't top-notch, that I can assure you. I wrote this novel as a bluff, i did not expect it to get this much attention(which i am grateful though) At the moment, I am going back to the first 50 chapters because that's where most of the problems are. I'd appreciate if any of you point out what you'd like to see fixed and rectified.The development, character design and world background get better at chapter 100, but the other chapters are not exactly the best that I can do. For those who have persisted, you have my thanks. Those who are pointing out the issues, I also appreciate you. Thank you for reading the novel and showing this much support.
Honestly surprised. I thought it was going to be trash, but it was really good. The descriptions Kaiser used for the setting and the main character's feelings were A+. I love this book so far-wishing for more great chapters.
Well written world setting. The author had taken care to ensure that every character has a proper introduction.Reminds one of their school/college days. A great read!
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