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I actually didn't have to burn any of my brain cells to read this novel.................................................................................
This story is very compelling and can pull you into the world and the characters backgrounds very easily. the characters themselves are very well written.
I don't know about other people but I had a bit of a hard time following at the beginning but I attribute that more to myself then your writing. Your description was vivid but dialog made me question weather an actual gamer would talk the way you wrote. Your style made it seem like they treated the game like the real world to much. Overall it was a decent read
I'm updating my review on this because the story is starting to get more interesting. one thing I really like about this story is that the cultivation is explained well. many cultivation novels do a terrible job of explaining the cultivation ranking system. not only does the author go into depth about how things work, but the addition of a system makes it really easy to understand. it seems like there's a lot of potential here and the action is picking up as well. I can't wait to see what happens once Young grows stronger.
C'est l'auteur ici, je donne 5 étoile a mon roman ( c'est normal non ? 😅😅 ). C'est mon premier roman donc vous trouver quelque faute au début, et merci de me signaler les erreurs et donner votre avis ca va beaucoup m'aider.
This lead many in the clan to be dissatisfied. But Shen's talent did not disappoint the Emperor his talents very rare. Once in a thousand. Many genius of the clan very left in the dust by him and this was done by him without any background no support. He trained himself to the peak he is standing right now.
He then lifted the forge up and then poured all the liquid out of the forge, he then suddenly released a massive amount of energy into a shape, it was a shape of a synth but it was very exquisite with fine and sharp details all along the blade. He poured the liquid into his energy and held it there, slowly shaping the liquid into it solidified.
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