I have read the mtl for this novel.Author draws out the story making boring to read in the long run.Plus there are too many misunderstanding between mc and the female lead making it too complicated for the mc to resolve. Also the romance between mc and fml just suck.
The story is good, the main character acts intelligent. All you need is patience as the story gets good as you follows... He doesn't act foolish as others.
Lemme just say this a great and finish this review quickly for people that just came here to look at the reviews a little.Pros:-mc isn’t a wimp-mc isn’t a simp- mc doesn’t seek a giant harem but has some of the most beautiful women in the world that are in love with him (some are obsessed)-unlike other harems the harem members don’t suddenly disappear only to never be heard of again. They are almost always with him and he cares for his women ALOOOOOOT.- he does not go around acting chummy and trusts everyone he meets. Has a heart that does not let others in easily as he went through some stuff in his childhood. Currently has a low number of people he “trusts” that can only be counted on ones fingers.-harem members actually have a personality and aren’t bland like so many other novels I read.-novel isnt very cliche other than the fact that a lot of people near him turn out to be op. But the reason they are actually makes sense unlike the others novels where mc picks up random girl that’s struggling in some weird way and WOAH WHO WOULDA THOUGHT SHE ACTUALLY HAS A SUPER INFINITY DIVINE HEAVENLY SOVEREIGN YIN YANG SPIRIT ROOT AND CONSTITUTION OF THE ANCIENT EVIL FIENDGODS AND ALSO SHES HEAVENLY EMPERORS DAUGHTER??!!!?!?. it makes sense cause though he hasn’t revealed it yet it’s obvious that most of the girls with him are due to some events mentioned in some of the earlier chapters. Mostly having to do with destiny(you’ll understand if you read it)- this could also be a con for some but you can simply skip if if you don’t like it as it wouldn’t matter much to the story. The story isn’t filled with lusty mc that bangs everyone and so far there haven’t been much smutty or $ex scenes ( whatever you wanna call it) but some people might like that so maybe you think this shouldn’t be on the PROS list but whatever.-mc does not back away from a challenge as he considers himself to be “extremely prideful” which leads him to be arrogant but it’s not the annoying kind. When he’s arrogant it’s funny to watch cause he embarrasses tf outta other people lol. Mc has only ran away from a battle twice but that’s only cause he wasn’t expecting it in the first place. The first one, though he was very weak at the time, he managed to counterattack the one that attacked him and swore he would someday kill him. The second one was already resolved by him.- mc isn’t stupid and not once has he put his loved in a a dangerous position cause of his actions. He also never lets someone get away from him. You know how mc in other novels fights a young master and young master gets defeated and shouts “ ILL BE BACK FOR REVENGE!!!!” While getting hauled away by his loyal bootlickers and mc just watches them leave like a total retard? Mc here did it a few times and that’s only because he was smart and noticed it would be disadvantage but finished what they started a few chapters later.- mc does not start as crippled trash ugly man with no talent. He was born and raised an orphan(don’t worry you won’t have to learn about his Chili’s hood by reading a lot of chapters) but was adopted into a family of some pretty noble people and become a very refined man. Looks normal at start but soon becomes one of the most handsome in the world( for those who don’t like normal looking mc)-not sure there are a few more but this is already too long and I doubt anyone would see this or especially read to the end.Cons:-sometimes the naming system is weird but it gets fixed in the later chapters.-author sometimes confuses names but that’s is also fixed in the later chapters. Lol that’s all I can think off. Anyway I’m waiting for more cause I finished all this in a day
i iike this novel. i like protagonist. story enjoyable but patroitis. i very like game about mekanisme, class, npc etc. i was reading this novel in other website but stopped.. i hope editor pick this novel.
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