Reading the latest chapters I feel like this story isn't for me especially mc when being so highly intelligent just keeps on creating disaster for himself which will blow up later for convenience of the plot and he can't even manipulate anyone as successfully and he is not even what he deems himself to be -
I am 99%,sure that the Book has been dropped. It was a good book while it lasted, especially the recent chapters(after 406), which were good. Too bad the author dropped after introducing some major plot points.
The writing quality is mindblowing, the character development is so reasonable and smooth, its almost shocking... And the presentation is truly magnificent..never read any Author's work that presented the story in such a godly way before... TBH can I know your age esteemed author kun and how did you develop such quality in writing ?
Good writing quality. But I hate the MC. He is a psychopath and not a villain by any means. Hence I can't seem to relate to him . He has no qualms in killing children. ( Small SPOILER . He blackmails a character using a child as a shield and later kills the character as well as the child) . He also hides his strength and act as a weak character which I seem to dislike. I am out. Sorry
Very boring, The protagonist until the 60 free chapters is simply pathetic, He is always afraid of the antagonist or the heroines, Always crying that he is weak but also doesn't do anything really good to change that fact, In short, It's torturous to read this novel .
Mr. Author dont get me wrong i like reading your story and your writing seems to get good with every chapter but you really need to stop breaking the fourth wall man, it's just annoying.
Please note make it romance
Avery this is good expet #Romance tag
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The humour is something 10-13 year old children will enjoy. It's like Phase 4 MCU with comedy overdone and at the wrong time. The writing quality is good. It's actually a 5/5 star novel if the author got rid of the cringe elements.
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don't buy into the negative comments all of them haven't read enough to judge it
Keep up the great work Author
Avery this is good expet #Romance tag
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