The best way i can describe this novel is has if you combined TBATE and Goodbye dragon life, but seeing his struggle from being the mightiest dragon to become a normal human and unlocking a system. Its fun, but not borringly overpowered. The con of the novel sadly is the grammar and mismatching vocabulary or some times of characters, but look past that and its worth a read.Im currently chapter 114
It's really quite common for a cultivation novel to have 3000+ chaps. Most of these novels are good in the beginning but would later turnout to be just soulless writing from author to exploit as much as he can.
Even though it's supposed to be a comedy, this isn't funny at all. It takes a severe lack of judgment to bring a strange kid from the street into your home. There’s no other explanation except the mother figure’s mental incompetence. Sadly, this aspect of the story already reveals its intellectual level, which seems to be aimed at people with an IQ of 5. Score: -100.
I'm a bit conflicted about this novel, to be honest. However, I would definitely recommend giving it a read, especially the first arc (around 100 chapters), which is pure gold. The character development and portrayal are spot-on, staying true to the original characters while exploring a fourth Grail War that unfolds in a completely different way from the others. If we were to judge based on the first arc alone, it might easily make it into my top 10 all-time favorites.
Unfortunately, the quality does dip a bit after that. Don’t get me wrong, it remains a very well-written and enjoyable book. However, while the first arc is fast-paced and captivating, with writing that draws you in and makes hours feel like minutes, the subsequent parts lose some of that intensity. It’s still a good read, but it lacks the same level of gripping immersion and vivid emotional impact found in the first arc.
In a way, it feels like the first arc set such a high bar that the rest of the book couldn’t quite match it. If a book improves from mediocre to good as you read, it leaves you somewhat satisfied. But if a book declines from a near-masterpiece to very good, it can leave you feeling disappointed, even though it’s still better than the first scenario.
I won’t delve too deeply into the specifics of what I love about the book, as there’s a lot to discuss and it would involve heavy spoilers. However, I can say that the first arc is a must-read for any Type-Moon fan, and from there, you can decide whether to continue or stop.
If you enjoy Fate fix-fics, you’ll probably like this. If you’re not a fan of characters acting out of character (OC) or the author taking liberties with the rules of the setting, you might not enjoy it.
Personally, this is one of my favorite Fate fanfics. The writing quality is quite good, and the author shows a lot of creativity at times. The protagonist is particularly proactive, which is refreshing. However, the author does take some liberties with powers, and the OC Shirou ends up with significantly more strength, pulling off feats that can feel a bit of a stretch. Depending on how strictly you adhere to Nasu lore, this might be a turn-off.
The story is fairly consistent with its theme and manages to justify the progression of events in a way that aligns with Fate’s rules. It’s also narratively cohesive, with the main character’s actions continuously building upon each other and some effective foreshadowing.
, it hits a lot of the notes I wanted in a fix-fic, providing satisfying endings for many of the characters I care about. It explores much of the expanded Fate setting while adding its own unique spin based on the consequences of the protagonist’s actions.
In summary, I enjoyed the plot, even though some characters were a bit OC. It mostly follows the rules of the setting but takes some liberties, which it tries to justify within the framework of Nasu’s rules.
This fanfic was crafted by a genuine TYPE-MOON enthusiast who has a deep understanding of the lore. The protagonist's journey through each parallel world is woven together seamlessly, making the story both coherent and logically sound. If you're looking to connect the dots between the various TYPE-MOON franchises, this is a must-read. It's quite rare for a fanfic or a Chinese novel to achieve this level of cohesion.
The translations are top-notch; it's clear that they weren't machine-translated like many other fanfic translations out there.
This is a well-crafted and thoroughly enjoyable piece of writing. The author masterfully utilizes every character's description and personality to the fullest extent, making their actions and decisions highly plausible. Even the lore of lesser-known characters is woven in seamlessly. The narrative focuses on the development of all characters, not just the main protagonist, which adds depth and richness to the story. At times, it can be emotionally poignant.
I hope this work can one day become canon—it’s that good.
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Unfortunately, the quality does dip a bit after that. Don’t get me wrong, it remains a very well-written and enjoyable book. However, while the first arc is fast-paced and captivating, with writing that draws you in and makes hours feel like minutes, the subsequent parts lose some of that intensity. It’s still a good read, but it lacks the same level of gripping immersion and vivid emotional impact found in the first arc.
In a way, it feels like the first arc set such a high bar that the rest of the book couldn’t quite match it. If a book improves from mediocre to good as you read, it leaves you somewhat satisfied. But if a book declines from a near-masterpiece to very good, it can leave you feeling disappointed, even though it’s still better than the first scenario.
I won’t delve too deeply into the specifics of what I love about the book, as there’s a lot to discuss and it would involve heavy spoilers. However, I can say that the first arc is a must-read for any Type-Moon fan, and from there, you can decide whether to continue or stop.
Personally, this is one of my favorite Fate fanfics. The writing quality is quite good, and the author shows a lot of creativity at times. The protagonist is particularly proactive, which is refreshing. However, the author does take some liberties with powers, and the OC Shirou ends up with significantly more strength, pulling off feats that can feel a bit of a stretch. Depending on how strictly you adhere to Nasu lore, this might be a turn-off.
The story is fairly consistent with its theme and manages to justify the progression of events in a way that aligns with Fate’s rules. It’s also narratively cohesive, with the main character’s actions continuously building upon each other and some effective foreshadowing.
, it hits a lot of the notes I wanted in a fix-fic, providing satisfying endings for many of the characters I care about. It explores much of the expanded Fate setting while adding its own unique spin based on the consequences of the protagonist’s actions.
In summary, I enjoyed the plot, even though some characters were a bit OC. It mostly follows the rules of the setting but takes some liberties, which it tries to justify within the framework of Nasu’s rules.
The translations are top-notch; it's clear that they weren't machine-translated like many other fanfic translations out there.
I hope this work can one day become canon—it’s that good.