I Want To Become a Beautiful Girl, Be Pampered, and Live Life on Easy Mode!

story starts as typical travel to past with a system in apocalypse novel, but with nerfs. then it continues as typical xianxia, just to change to some kind of mystery novel. authors is making lots of plotholes and then forcibly explains them later in story with twisted logic. for someone who is reincarnated into past MC is really stupid. instead of getting help, he tries to do everything solo... fate of the whole city hangs on his knowledge, but he must be in front lines every single time there is a disaster. what ticks me the off most is when there is ultra time sensitive danger MC has to write an essay to other characters explaining his logic for running away. also the philosophical discussions with enemies about class divide between superhumans and normals. it is just rinse and repeat. every time enemies get caught they have to justify their betrayal and every time reason is the same (with slight differences). and world background just doesnt make sense... whole city transmigrated to other planet, having zombie apocalypse, viruses abound, monsters attacking and in just 50 years they have population of tens of millions. even if city had 50 million people when it transmigrated i doubt that 1 in 100 could survive initial 10 years. food intake that even 1 million city needs everyday is enormous, not to mention bigger cities.

Pretty decent story so far. One thing I found annoying is how easy it is to steal cars which makes no sense for a more technology advanced society. The first car that was taken at least had the pretext of a spare key in the visor, after that people are stealing dozens of cars right and left. Even the heavily armed police vehicle was taken away without issue.

At that moment, Wie Lan, the instructor who put a punishment on the two is casually having a meeting with their director. The notice is abrupt that classes was put on hold. It seems that they will be having a big event that their director was frantic at the moment.

   SEGUNDO NÍVEL: Melhorar Os Sentidos Do Corpo: OLFATO, AUDIÇÃO, PALADAR, VISÃO, PREMONIÇÃO, PRESSENTIMENTO DESBLOQUEADO, Aumento De Inteligência, Capacidade De Aquisição Magica.

"The rule is to survive inside, as long as you can, and the scenario will be different with each and everyone of you. This will test your power, decision-making and talent or it will just show us your pathetic and weak self who are just strong because of the equipment your mommy and daddy bought for you. Hehe in here, we only want the strong. The Archaic Tone will record your score on the piece of paper that you have so don't lose it or you will be failed instantly. I will give ten more minutes to prepare but before that is there any other questions?" (Mrs. Porter)

When he got up he quickly made himself a breakfast and went straight to his office. But since he was fired he could no longer use his ID to get in.

"Brother your fighting style is too reckless. You should take care of yourself."

I like the mc and the development for him but the grammar isn’t the best tbh if you just fix these little errors it would be better.