the story is complete hot trash you make it go to fast your grammar is trash but you can get better i know you might not like how i'm saying this but how you made it was trash but if you start taking it slow let us see how he grew how they'r relation ships moved it would be way better than those anti hero storys
Marvelous, amazing, superb....Why there is a lot of genius writer out there?I'm very much interested in this novel.It makes mr curious abkut the development of the MC....
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People stared at my hand all day. A rumor started spreading that I had did some mischievous acts with Mia-san or Oneka-senpai, and that they fought back which resulted in me bandaging my arm. All the girls of school avoided me as I passed through the halls.
He calmly drew the 'flag' symbol in the air. Although the foundation symbols were somewhat complex, Lin Ming's finger did not have the slightest pause, and in the blink of an eye, the complex inscription symbol sparkled in the air.
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