
I, The Dragon Overlord
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Author:
Green Moon,青之月,
- Status: Completed
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In almost every chapter you have dialogs like this:
-"How about all of you first announce your name?" Melody said telling them to reveal their names to her.
"Alright. "
Vincent, John, Iris, Varth, Leilani, and Nevis revealed their names to the fairy, taking several seconds to do so. -
You often have a lengthy exposition to a topic, then somebody mentions it in almost the same words and then you get a reply often in the same style. So you read the same words 3 times in a row. The example above is just one without spoilers, but once you notice this pattern, it gets exhausting to read.
Also, dialogues are far too "detailed". Where a normal, short answer would be the norm and perfectly fine, here you have long answers with all the details so the conversations dont "feel" like conversations normal people would have.
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Like, why is it even necessary?
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Hope to see u in the comments once this earth arc finishes. This might be the last earth arc btw.
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Edit - I might be wrong. There are 808 chapters in total so there might be at least one more earth arc after this... hopefully not.
Nevertheless I tried it up to ch. 20
While the writing needs more creativity and the description of lewdness toned down a bit, I'm enjoying it to a degree
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