I See One Second Into The Future: Loner In The Apocalypse

This is fantastic, the development, and action scenes are very well developed, the character growth, and strength growth is really well done, and I can see myself reading this for a long time.

It's alright if you don't mind reading contradictions. The title is bs, he's all abou 't forming a team even before it begins, and he cuts himself as a form of pain resistence training since forever...

He also apparently had dreams about the apocalypse and didn't do Jack to prepare other than cutting himself.

Flashbacks are poorly indicated if at all.

Its an alright read if you don't mind feeling you read a poorly translated wuxia novel with great grammar and western names.

That said, that's only up until it gets monitized and if there really isn't anything else to read. Its like listening to a little kid spewing off his fantasies about how this and that character he imagines is better because if yours does this, his will have a special item or prep to do that, and then when you bring the slightest Incling of logic into play, not even pragmatism but simply, I thought you said he is this and that, then obviously he's that too but the new and better thing more so.

Get it? There's no lasting definition in anything. First chapter paints him as some sort of bullied unfortunate self destructive lonely emo kid that can see the future, and the next he's calling his friends, mostly girls to get away from the windows cuz the sun is bad and takes of his mystical glasses of a clear stone that blocks his future sight abilities that he found as a kid cuz else he be like cyclops with his lazer beams so he needs tha mystical glasses to block his future sight...

Ya get it? No? Exactly. That's what the story is like.

All I can say is yes-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

from what I read so far your doing really good my personal preference would be the Mc focuses on agility and knives  but it I am looking forward to how he will evolve and develop his future sight and powers

I See One Second Into The Future: Loner In The Apocalypse is a story about about Kairos, someone who can see one second into the future. He uses this ability in order to survive a sudden apocalyptic event, where the sun is deadly, and monsters appear.

Novel had at interesting design, and the main character had a interesting ability, however there's too many things that cause you to go "that just doesn't make sense".

Writing quality is pretty good. It's readable, no obvious grammatical errors or mistakes. Nothing to write home about either. (4/5 stars)

Onto the story development. Like I said previously, this novel had a interesting premise, where the sun can kill you, while it creates various monsters. However, there is a downright ridiculous amount of plot holes. I'll just make a quick list.

- The words "loner in the apocalypse" are in the title. This is the opposite of what happens, the main character immediately makes a party with people who he doesn't trust. Later on, he accepted someone else into the party that he himself admitted that if the guy didn't have a certain weakness, he would try to kill them all.
- The main character doesn't trust his party, so he doesn't upgrade his stats to show of his strength. A few chapters after stating this, he immediately fights ten+ monsters all on his own. (They are more powerful than humans)
- Main character stocks up on stat points for no reason. You cannot add stat points while in combat as it would disrupt your attention. This happens over and over. He decided to attack a group of bandits with average-ish stats (2 - 4 points in each stat) while having 20+ points that aren't allocated.
- Main character fights some random chick with red hair that has a katana. After making her surrender, the main character asks for her katana. She gets a new weapon before giving it to them. Main character for some reason accepts this stupid arrangement. Then, the main character, despite literally being able to see the future, lets her take one of his companions hostage.

Theres more, but I can't be asked to write about this completely illogical story. (1/5 stars)

Character design. It's meh. Side characters are rather useless, not sure why the main character decided to take them in. After all, part of the title is "loner in the apocalypse". Aside from that, the main character is exceedingly stupid. Nothing he does makes sense. He accepts people he doesn't trust into his group, including people who have every reason to kill him. He decides to hide his strength, before choosing to randomly show it off a few chapters later, etc. (2/5 stars)

World background is a solid 3/5. I have only read eighteen chapters so I can't say a whole lot. There isn't a terrible amount of world-building, but the amount of content before the apocalypse was rather lackluster. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars)

Overall, I feel like the novel would've been much better if the author went through his novel for the ridiculous amount of plot holes. I feel like the author didn't really have a plan. I give this novel 3 out of 5 stars.

i like it keep going and don't drop i can't wait to see more chapters. [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update][img=update]

Title is “Loner in the Apocalypse” but immediately after it starts he groups up. Hoped for something a little unique, but this one so far just seems basic.

I will not die not for someone else this is the sypnosis
But why do you have romance isnt that will make the story the opposite of your story