Love the concept and the characters, needs better Grammer but that can be fixed later.The MC actually thinks some of what he does through and doesn't just do it and deal with the consequences later.
well not much world background, not much depth in characters, only know he needs to gain immortality, well i think it'll improve in the future, good luck
I took a quick look at the later episodes, and as far as I understand, there's not much harem stuff, and the stupid person at the beginning is still alive in the later episodes. And he's shown more, not less, as if he's the main character. Anyway, have a good time you.
The synopsis piques my attention the reason why I continue to read the story. The author did very well in describing the scenes and the plot is been lay down perfectly. Hoping for an update. Overall the story is nice! And gonna recommend this to a friend:) Keep it up😘😍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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