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The MC has no intelligence to speak of, the author claims this is in America yet there are cultivation techniques and a singular American name that becomes Chinese a few chapters in.
The book is quite acceptable, however I will give the author a couple of recommendations... Give more prominence to the mc... The author makes a mistake that all authors of books make. and that is to give much prominence to a secondary pj is very boring to read several chapters of secondary characters and then a few of Mc... I'm not saying that I don't mind a couple of chapters telling the history of the world. The protagonist's past. Or one or another event in the world. However from my opinion that kind of chapters should not exceed the amount of (4), the perfect synchrony would be several chapters of the (Mc) And between 1 and 4 chapters of the past, secondary Pj, events in the world... This is my opinion. The book has a lot of potential simply is to give more prominence to the Mc. Read 10 chapters where there is no progress of the mc is totally boring ... PsdT: English is not my first language so excuse the spelling mistakes.
Gonna need some more chapters of this, It's like a badass older samurai playing around in current day video games. Hopefully the censorship stops soon so we can get some blood and gore.
Ah man.. good story.. you have marvelous background story.. path of beast king.. make sure you make great story.. because if you are not make good story.. you will make the background suck.. overall this is great.. and this like game that I know.. with nickname that normal and not like poetry in Chinese vrmmo novel
I would like to have given this story a better rating but the author writes something that could be really fun and very enjoyable and instead it turns out to feel really, really drawn and dragged out. Don't get me wrong it has some solid moments. But those moments are vastly drowned out and over shadowed by things being drawn out. For example: There is a chapter that consists basically of just asking how a couple people slept that night.I can handle things being slow paced but only if it feels natural in the writing. In this case it just feels like things are being intentionally dragged along. That said I will probably continue reading every now and then but it most certainly wouldn't be something I'd recommend to others.
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