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Great job, hope you can write more chapters l, thanks for  your hard working, keep on, 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 more chapters many thanks

I say this is kinda illogical. if there will be batrayed gods then it is ok to explain why mc got such a op talent. if not i think the gods need to check their brain a little.

How dare you let us live with such a cliffhanger. This evilness must be comparable to not giving a top rating for a web novel chapter a person liked😅. Is Foo exposed? Will his secrets remain? Will he be marked as a cheater (who he obviously is not)😂😂? To get the answer we will have to wait a whole day 😔

Had potential. The concept was good but it was all ruined by the authors horrible grammar. Main characters iq is borderline 0, easily manipulated, vague character, has the memory of a rock, and his actions make no sense. Basically, the mc nobody likes. His parents really care about him to the point of aging 10 years in a day, yet the next day they let him marry some random girl because shes pretty, no opposition at all. Also he becomes a wuxia character that offends anyone because of a girl he just met, and goes and offends one of the biggest families there, all mid chapter. And then, since shes the boss of the house on her first day there, he has to sleep on the floor of his own room. Overall, a novel that could've been good.

Overall 3.3The title, synopsis, system and cover are pretty much all lies. I don’t see clicking to level up or get points. The system is the default except it can level up with points. MC doesn’t use the system much to jam in background and characters. It is not easygoing, etc to read. It’s dry expository, like reading a diary of someone’s life.Writing 3.5Rounded up to 4. Seriously though, why with the sentence fragments, especially when describing the uncle?Updating 5It says 18/week. Quality beats quantity. Slow down and read over your writing. If you feel nothing, or it doesn’t have any moments that stick out, you need to fix that.Story 1When there is a system, especially when hyped up this much, readers expect it to lead the MC’s decisions. Since the premise is flawed and the system is both shafted and underwhelming, you get nothing.Characters 3.5Rounded up to 4. MC is shown to be mature but puts his golden finger second to his ongoing day, as if anyone getting a second chance wouldn’t try exploiting or even exploring their system in the spare moments they have. Too many people looking down on MC for my taste. There aren’t enough normal people to interact with, and MC is lowkey despite his previous ambitions of grandeur.Background 3.5Rounded up to 4. Moments get slowed down because passages must be dedicated to descriptions. The pacing can be improved if descriptions are more dynamic and concurrent instead of the static and stale showcasing there is now.

Do not waste your time. Typical waste MC you have read many times before with similar plots and schemes. I am over it. How can Chinese people read the same thing over and over again. A repetition just small minor changes. This is only good enough for new arrivals reading light novels.

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This is not an original work by arzone. the original author is Daisuke Aizawa please mass report this. its one thing to translate without permission its another to actually act like you're the authorhttps://***.amazon.com/Eminence-Shadow-Vol-light-novel/dp/1975359054